Hello! Can u help me with my text, please? Are there any mistakes? (Thank u)
There are so many activities I know like go clubbing, play computer games, go window shopping and do voluntary work. Also people can do extreme sports like horse riding or rock climbing.
In my country most teens enjoy hanging out with friends, listening music and watching TV. And teenagers really like shopping. They know all about new designer labels and shops with bargains in the city centre.
As for me, I think it's boring. I'm active, brave, outgoing and strong. And I'm not a '' square-eyed'' person. I can't stand spending time with gadgets, because it's waste of time. I go for a sporty look usually. So I'm crazy about horse riding. That's all.
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Hello! Can you help me with my text, please? Are there any mistakes? (Thank you)
There are so many activities I know, such as, clubbing, playing computer games, window shopping and voluntary work. Some people enjoy extreme sports such as horse riding or rock climbing.
In my country most teens enjoy hanging out with friends, listening to music and watching TV. Also teenagers really like shopping. They know all about new designer labels and shops with bargains in the city center.
As for me, I find shopping boring. I'm active, brave, outgoing and strong and I'm not a square-eyed person. I can't stand spending time with gadgets, because it's a waste of time. I usually go for a sporty look. I'm crazy about horse riding. That's all.
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There are so many activities I know like going clubbing, playing computer games, going window shopping and doing voluntary work. Also, people can do extreme sports like horse riding or rock climbing.
In my country most teens enjoy hanging out with friends, listening to music and watching TV. And teenagers really like shopping. They know all about new designer labels and shops with bargains in the city centre.
As for me, I think it's boring. I'm active, brave, outgoing and strong. And I'm not a '' square-eyed'' person. I can't stand spending time with gadgets, because it's a waste of time. I usually go for a sporty look. So I'm crazy about horse riding. That's all.
I loved your text. I can't stand all these materialistic mind frame either. Great job!
In my country most teens enjoy hanging out with friends, listening to music and watching TV. And teenagers really like shopping. They know all about new designer labels and shops with bargains in the city centre.
As for me, I think it's boring. I'm active, brave, outgoing and strong. And I'm not a '' square-eyed'' person. I can't stand spending time with gadgets, because it's a waste of time. I usually go for a sporty look. So I'm crazy about horse riding. That's all.
I loved your text. I can't stand all these materialistic mind frame either. Great job!
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