Confession
Friends, let me confess once and for all,
I'm in love with someone
who is handsome and tall.
But my heart aches,
this feeling I cannot take,
because the distance between us is so wide and great.
I live in a small country in Southeast Asia
while my prince dwells in the
Kingdom of Saudi Arabia.
Sadly, this prince of mine
has someone else in mind.
He never sees me as
someone to marry instead
just a friend that he holds dearly. :(
He does not know yet how I feel for him.
I have never told him about my innermost feelings.
I fear that once I tell him,
he will reject everything and
it will be a sad ending.
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Please correct my entry and also, give me some sound advice regarding my love life. Hahaha! jk
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Corrections · 2
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Hahaha, thanks Timothy. Great advice! Please check my other entries as well. Thank you.
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There are no actual grammatical errors here, and I am not a poetry critic. As to your love life, there are many Saudi princes in the sea. Good luck.
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