错对自己的意见

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello.  I'm a girl from China. in my view.  I do not think English is very difficulties to learn (if you want to use "in my view' or 'in my opinion' it is better to leave out the "I do not think" part and say:  In my opinion, English is not very difficult to learn.)  But we need courage to say and capturespeak and learn more.  I sincerely hope have foreigners friends.B because I like foreign cultures.and want to improve my eEnglish.  Believe me., I amwill make a good friend for you.  I have many habbitshobbies(你的意思是不是爱好?).  I think if you touchcontact me.R regardless of age.W we will become friends.

注意句号之后要放两个空格 :) 写得很不错！

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello. I'm a girl from China. In my view, I do not think English is very difficulties difficult to learn. But we need courage to say and capture. I sincere sincerely hope to have foreigners friends because I like foreign culture and want to improve my English. Believe me, I am can be a good friend for to you. I have many habbits* . I think if you touch me, regardless of age, we will become friends.

*Do you mean 'hobbies'?

Just remember to put a 'space' after using a full stop.

Hope this is ok. I'm not a teacher so I did my best! hahaha.

Good work :) haha