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Could you correct this, pleaaase? :3 ******** Street C***** 3**** M**** Spain Restaurant Big Food ******** Street M**** 7th May, 2019 Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to complain my experience in one of your restaurants. I had thought that your restaurant was an adecuate place to have lunch. Unfortunately, I was wrong. Last Saturday, the 4th of May, I was visiting the city of Murcia. At 2 p.m. I decided to have lunch in "Big Food", because I was hungry and the food there seemed good. I entered the place, where there wasn't many people, and waited for about half an hour until a waiter came. He asked me what I was going to eat with a very bad behaviour. Then, I waited for another hour to receive my food. When I finally got it, it was cold and it didn't have a good taste. Because of these reasons, I would like you to give me a refund of the money that I paid for my lunch. There is an attachment with the price of the food I asked for. I'll expect an answer in a short time. Yours sincerely, María.

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Could you correct this, pleaaase? :3

******** Street
C*****
3****
M****
Spain

Restaurant Big Food
******** Street
M****

7th May, 2019

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about my experience in one of your restaurants. I had thought that your restaurant was an adequate place to have lunch. Unfortunately, I was wrong.

Last Saturday, the 4th of May, I was visiting the city of Murcia. At 2 p.m. I decided to have lunch in "Big Food", because I was hungry and the food there seemed good. I entered the place  and while there weren't many people, I waited for about half an hour until a waiter came. He asked me what I was going to eat with a very bad attitude. Then, I waited for another hour to receive my food. When I finally got it, it was cold and it didn't taste good. 

Because of these reasons, I would like you to give me a refund of the money that I paid for my lunch. There is an attachment with the price of the food I asked for. I expect an answer in a short time.
Yours sincerely,
María.

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