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It is worthwhile for parents to talk to their children’s friends Today people know the importance of having good relation in family. Some people think that it’s good idea to communicate with children’s friends. But others are sure that we don’t need to maintain companionship with the children’s environment. I haven’t got any children but I have nephew and I’m sure that I’ll know his friends. As for me, the company around children influences on them and we need to know who they are. It’s the way to protect our family. We can see the first sign of bad affection and stop it. There is a point of view that family is the safeties place in the world. The place where people care about you, want to protect you and people who will always with you. So, I think that parents need to talk to their children’s friends But others aren’t agreeing with that point of view. They say that parents often violate the boundaries of personal life. They are sure that such a phenomenon threatens to be incomprehensible. Because such people limit the circle of communication, specify with whom to be friends, what to do and how to live. Moreover, such behavior deprives the child of development in social life and accumulation of experience. Of course, this is the place to be. But everything needs to be approached wisely. We need to control our children’s behavior and their environment and not to say how to life. But to control situations and give good advice. Because teens think that they are the best one and they know everything better than parents. We just need sometimes to show them situations from another point of view. To summing up, it’s up decide to you how to raise a child. But from my point of view we need to know children’s friends and know their doings. And, of course, we need to be ready to help our children but just a giving advice.

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It is worthwhile for parents to talk to their children’s friends

Today people know the importance of having good relationships in your family. Some people think that it’s good idea to communicate with children’s friends. But others are sure that we don’t need to maintain companionship with the children’s environment.

I haven’t got do not have any children, but I have a nephew and I’m sure that I’ll I will know his friends. As for me, the company around children influences on them and we need to know who they are. It’s the way to protect our family. We can see the first sign of bad affection* and stop it. There is a point of view that family is the safeties safest place in the world. The place where people care about you, want to protect you and people who will always **___** with you. So, I think that parents need to talk to their children’s friends.

But others aren’t Not everyone agreeing agrees with that point of view. They Some say that parents often violate the boundaries of personal life. They are sure that such a phenomenon threatens to be incomprehensible***. Because such people limit the circle of communication, specify with whom to be friends, what to do and how to live. Moreover, such behavior deprives the child of development in social life and the accumulation of experience.

Of course, this is the place to be. But everything needs to be approached wisely. We need to control our children’s behavior and their environment. and We do not need to say how to life. but to control situations and give good advice. Because teens think that they are the best one and they know everything better than parents. We just need sometimes to show them situations from another point of view. To summing up, In conclusion, it’s up to you to decide to you how to raise a your child. But from my point of view, we need to know children’s friends and know their doings activities. And, of course, we need to be ready to help our children but by just a giving advice.

*Do you mean "influence" or "affection" here?
** People will always what with you? Support you? Be with you?
***"Threatens to be incomprehensible" something either is incomprehensible or isn't, something can not threaten to be incomprehensible.
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Polina, I agree with you ! Parents need to have a close relationship with their children in order to know their problems and their concerns. Sometimes, children's misbehavior is caused by parents' indifference of spending useful time with them.
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hi Polina, after reading your text I guess you are a really caring person and I absolutely agree when you say that parents have to show children how to see the world from a different point of view, but on the other hand I think ok, none can deny is truly important to know their friends, however is likewise important being careful not to be tied up to them too much, it only could be dangerous, that's why I believe their growth would be better rather following right advice than being chased by parents everywhere.

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