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Claire
My dairy This Monday,Tuesday,Wednesday,Thursday,Friday are rainy day. Saturday is sunny day, so i and my family go to the cinema, we watch a fantasy movie, the movis name is Aquama. I think man lead's build is very strong and tall. Nicole Kidman is man lead's mother in the movie , but i can believe it, Nicole looks so beautiful. lead female actress/lead male actor My Diary

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My dairy,

This Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday and Friday have been rainy days. It's Saturday today and it's sunny so my family and I went to the cinema where we watched a fantasy movie called Aquaman. The leading actor has a good build and he is very strong and tall. Nicole Kidman is the mother of the leading actor in the movie. I can't believe it!  Nicole looks so beautiful.
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My Diary

This week, Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday and Friday were rainy day.
Saturday was a sunny day, so my family and I went to the cinema. We watched a fantasy movie called Aquama.
I thought the lead male actor was very strong and tall.
Nicole Kidman was the lead male actor's mother in the movie , but I couldn't believe it, Nicole looked so beautiful and too young to be his mother.


Well done! 寫得不錯！

-逗號後面一定要加上空格

-當你列舉出來一系列的名詞時，最後一個與倒數第二個中間不能使用逗號，而是要加上空格

-注意一下動詞的時態

加油！

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