Essay question- Obesity
Over the last few years we can see a lot of people with obesity. It is not a case only in western countries, but i my country, too. The problem is becoming worse and worse and it is important to take steps to stop this tendention.
Obesity touch an adults and children, so it is a high time to try tackle this problem. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity and how could it be tackled? This essay will look at the main causes of the problem and propose some solution.
First of all, people nowadays do not plan their meals. They have not enough time to think about dinner or super. When they are in shops, buy something which can prepare in a few miutes. Often there are not a healthy food. Adults do not talk about good habits to their children, so young persons do the same thing as their parents- eating in hurry, some fast-food, without wegetables or friuts.
Moreover, fewer people have a healthy diet and excersise often. People going to work by car, sitting at work about 8 hours and then, sitting in front of the V eating some snacks and drinking a beer. It is not an example for healthy, good planned day. Unfortunatelly, a lot of people, includes adults and children make this lifestyle.
How could it be tackle?
To tackle this problem of obesity people should carefully choose what they eat. No choose fast food, but better and more healthy meals with a good plan. The way forward might be to educate children and adults how to enter healthy customs in their daily life.
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Over the last few years we can see a lot of people with obesity. It is not a case only in western countries, but in my country, too. The problem is becoming worse and worse/the problem is getting woree and it is important to take steps to stop this trend.
Obesity affects both adults and children, so it is an important time to try to tackle this problem. What are the reasons for the rise in obesity and how could it be tackled? This essay will look at the main causes of the problem and propose some solution.
First of all, people nowadays do not plan their meals. They do not have enough time to think about dinner or supper. When they are in shops, they buy something that can be prepared in a few minutes. Often there isn't healthy food. Adults do not talk about good habits to their children, so young people do the same thing as their parents- eating in a hurry, some fast-food, without vegetables or fruits.
Moreover, fewer/leas people have /follow a healthy diet and excersise often. People going to work by car, sitting at work for about 8 hours and then, sitting in front of the TV eating some snacks and drinking a beer. It is not an example of a healthy, well-planned day. Unfortunatelly, a lot of people, including adults and children follow this lifestyle.
How could it be tackled? /How can we tackle it?
To tackle this problem of obesity, people should carefully choose what they eat. Instead of choosing fast food, they should choose better and healthier meals with a good plan. The way forward might be to educate children and adults how to start /create healthy customs/habits in their daily life.
Obesity affects both adults and children, so it is an important time to try to tackle this problem. What are the reasons for the rise in obesity and how could it be tackled? This essay will look at the main causes of the problem and propose some solution.
First of all, people nowadays do not plan their meals. They do not have enough time to think about dinner or supper. When they are in shops, they buy something that can be prepared in a few minutes. Often there isn't healthy food. Adults do not talk about good habits to their children, so young people do the same thing as their parents- eating in a hurry, some fast-food, without vegetables or fruits.
Moreover, fewer/leas people have /follow a healthy diet and excersise often. People going to work by car, sitting at work for about 8 hours and then, sitting in front of the TV eating some snacks and drinking a beer. It is not an example of a healthy, well-planned day. Unfortunatelly, a lot of people, including adults and children follow this lifestyle.
How could it be tackled? /How can we tackle it?
To tackle this problem of obesity, people should carefully choose what they eat. Instead of choosing fast food, they should choose better and healthier meals with a good plan. The way forward might be to educate children and adults how to start /create healthy customs/habits in their daily life.
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Essay question- Obesity
Over the last few years we can see a lot of people with obesity. It is not a case only in western countries, butObesity
First of all, people nowadays do not plan their meals. They
Moreover, fewer people have a healthy diet and excersise often. People going to work by car, sitting at work about 8 hours and then, sitting in front of the V eating some snacks and drinking a beer. It is not an example for a healthy,
How could it be tackled?
To tackle this problem of obesity people should carefully choose what they eat.
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Essay question- Obesity
Over the last few years we have seen a lot of people with obesity. It is not a case only in western countries, but in my country, too. The problem is becoming far worse and it is important to take steps to stop this tendency.First opening sentences absolutely must be "we have seen", because you need to bring into agreement something that has been happening during the past and is still continuing to happen, with what WE HAVE SEEN.
Other corrections would just be a difference of opinion but this opening error is the major error that begins your essay.
Also different people do swap the order or place where they say or write "also" some say "it is not a case only in western countries" and some say "it is not only a case in western countries" ..both are the same.
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Essay question- Obesity
Over the last past few years, we can see have seen a lot many of people with obesity. It is not a case only in western countries, but in my country, too. The problem is becoming increasingly worse and worse and it is important to take steps to stop this tendention trend.
Obesity touch effects an adults and children, so it is a high time to try to tackle this problem. What are the reasons for this the rise in obesity and how could it be tackled can it be prevented? This essay will look at the main causes of the problem and propose some a solution.
First of all, people nowadays do not plan their meals. They have do not have enough time to think about dinner or super. When they are in shops the stores they buy something which can be prepared in a few minutes. Often there it is are not a healthy food. Adults do not talk about good habits to their children, so young persons people do the same thing as their parents- eating in hurry, some and eat fast-food, without vegetables or fruit.
Moreover, fewer people have a healthy diet and or exercise often. People going travel to work by car, sitting at work a desk for about 8 hours and then, sitting in front of the TV, eating some snacks and drinking a beer. It is not an example for a healthy, good well planned day. Unfortunately, a lot of people, includes adults and children make involved in this lifestyle.
How could can it this be tackle changed?
To tackle this the problem of obesity, people should carefully choose what they eat. No choose Choose not to eat fast food, but better and more nutritious and healthy meals with a good plan. The way forward might may also be to educate children and adults how to enter maintain healthy customs habits in their daily life.
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