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Mary's skills and personal quailities. I'll talk a little about one of my favorite subject: Me. My name is María, I was born on January 30 in Ciudad del Carmen, Mexico. My family says that during my childhood I was always very calm, independent and intelligent. I liked to play a lot with my dolls and imagine that I could sing like Tatiana, later, I grew up I wanted to dance like Shakira. I was too young to understand that each person has skills and qualities that make them unique, for example, you, what are your strengths? In mi case, I´m good with numbers and it is one of the reasons why I decided to study engineering. During university, I had the opportunity to participate in several robotics competitions where I showed that I'm good with electronics and I'm good at using tools,assembling parts,building robots, working in a team,working well under pressure and I'm able to meet deadlines. I was president of the student branch IEEE (Institute of electrical and electronic engineers) of the university. One of my tasks was to organize a robotics competition for students from different schools, I discovered that I'm good leader, I'm good at assigning and delegating tasks, managing work groups, I have time management skills, problem solving skills, self-confidence, ability to accept and learn from criticism and I'm responsible. When I graduated I was scared because I felt I wasn't ready for adult life, my first job was completely different from engineering, I worked as an accounting assistant, there I was responsible for paying payrolls, paying bills, capturing data for the worker's medical service, contacting suppliers, among other activities. I didn't know anything about that, but I've always been good at learning new things and a persistent person. Another quality,I can lick my elbow, can you do it? It's a joke, me neither. I'm good at practicing yoga, although I don't anymore, I'm good at weight training, I consider myself a dedicated person and most of the time disciplined. This (--_--) (angry face) has been my face all my life, I can seem like an indifferent person, I'm too sincere, and it seems that I'm always angry or I hate the world, but the reality is different. I don't hate the world, I like to help and listen to people. Sometimes I'm too clown, and I like to make silly faces, I'm a respectful person,empathetic,friendly,affectionate but also very impatient, I consider myself a good friend,good daughter and person, but I'm always trying to learn and improve for myself and for others.

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I'll talk a little about one of my favorite subject: Me.

My name is María, I was born on January 30th in Ciudad del Carmen, Mexico. My family says that during my childhood I was always very calm, independent and intelligent. I liked to play a lot with my dolls and imagine that I could sing like Tatiana, later, I grew up wanting to dance like Shakira. I was too young to understand that each person has skills and qualities that make them unique, for example, you, what are your strengths? In my case, I´m good with numbers and it is one of the reasons why I decided to study engineering. During university, I had the opportunity to participate in several robotics competitions where I showed that I'm good with electronics and I'm good at using tools, assembling parts, building robots, working in a team, working well under pressure and I'm able to meet deadlines.

I was president of the student branch IEEE (Institute of electrical and electronic engineers) of the university. One of my tasks was to organize a robotics competition for students from different schools, I discovered that I'm a good leader, I'm good at assigning and delegating tasks, managing work groups, I have time management skills, problem solving skills, self-confidence, the ability to accept and learn from criticism and I'm responsible.
When I graduated I was scared because I felt I wasn't ready for adult life, my first job was completely different from engineering, I worked as an accounting assistant, there I was responsible for making payrolls, paying bills, capturing data for the worker's medical service, contacting suppliers, among other activities. I didn't know anything about that, but I've always been good at learning new things and a persistent person.


Another quality ,I can lick my elbow, can you do it? It's a joke, me neither. I'm good at practicing yoga, although I don't anymore, I'm good at weight training, I consider myself a dedicated person and most of the time I'm disciplined.
This (--_--) (angry face) has been my face all my life, I can seem like an indifferent person, I'm too sincere, and it seems that I'm always angry or I hate the world, but the reality is different. I don't hate the world, I like to help and listen to people.


Sometimes I'm too silly, and I like to make silly faces, I'm a respectful person, empathetic, friendly, affectionate but also very impatient, I consider myself a good friend, a good daughter and person, but I'm always trying to learn and improve for myself and for others.


Congratulations, that's a great description! I can't lick my elbow, either. 

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I'll talk a little about one of my favorite subject: Me. My name is María, I was born on the 30th of January in Ciudad del Carmen, Mexico. My family says that during my childhood I was always very calm, independent and intelligent. I liked to play a lot with my dolls and imagine that I could sing like Tatiana, later, I grew up and wanted to dance like Shakira. I was too young to understand that each person has skills and qualities that make them unique, for example, you, what are your strengths? In my case, I´m good with numbers and it is one of the reasons why I decided to study engineering. During university, I had the opportunity to participate in several robotics competitions where I showed that I'm good with electronics and I'm good at using tools,assembling parts,building robots, working in a team,working well under pressure and I'm able to meet deadlines. I was president of the student branch IEEE (Institute of electrical and electronic engineers) of the university. One of my tasks was to organize a robotics competition for students from different schools, I discovered that I'm a good leader, I'm good at assigning and delegating tasks, managing work groups, I have time management skills, problem solving skills, self-confidence, ability to accept and learn from criticism and I'm responsible. When I graduated I was scared because I felt I wasn't ready for adult life, my first job was completely different from engineering, I worked as an accounting assistant, there I was responsible for paying payrolls, paying bills, capturing data for the workers' medical service, contacting suppliers, among other activities. I didn't know anything about them, but I've always been good at learning new things and have been a persistent person. Another quality, I can lick my elbow, can you do that? It's a joke, me neither. I'm good at practicing yoga, although I don't anymore, I'm good at weight training, I consider myself a dedicated person and most of the time disciplined. This (--_--) (angry face) has been my face all my life, I can seem like an indifferent person, I'm too sincere, and it seems that I'm always angry or I hate the world, but the reality is different. I don't hate the world, I like to help and listen to people. Sometimes I'm too much of a clown, and I like to make silly faces, I'm a respectful, empathetic, friendly, affectionate person but also very impatient, I consider myself a good friend, a good daughter and a person, but I'm always trying to learn and improve, for myself and for others.

*Sorry but i'm new to this app, I didn't realize you could highlight the actual corrections but it's a bit late now hahaha. Hope the small corrections I made help because you have a very good standard of English!!

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