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Life feeling I'm a shy girl,but i want to be optimistic and brave girl.I often feel disturbed,becourse unexpected things happen every day.I often think how i can make life more meaningful.I want to go to a lot of places and experience the culture of different countries.I want to lots of things,but how should i begin.I always dream i can chang myself and my life.Many interest things will happen.I don't need to be famous, but I hope to bring everyone happy。I don't know lots of things,so i need learn.We work together! I'm so proud that i can live in China.Here the splendid civilization and traditional technology cause my strong interest.But many of them have disappeared。I'm often disppointed to it.Comn on!

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Life feeling

I'm a girl who is shy girl,but i want to be optimistic and brave girl.

Here is the structure: I am an noun who is adjective 1, adjective 2, ... "I am a student who is smart, funny and hard working.

I often feel disturbed,becourse because unexpected things happen every day.I often think how i can make life more meaningful.I want to go to a lot of places and experience the culture of different countries.I want to do lots of things,but how where should i begin?

Where should I begin?  means that you don't know what you should do first.

I always dream I can change myself and my life.Many interest things will happen.

I don't need to be famous, but I hope to bring make everyone happy。

We make people happy.  I want to make my parents happy, so I study hard.

I don't know lots of things,so I need learn.We Let's work together! I'm so proud that i can live in China.Here I have a strong interest in China's splendid civilization and traditional technology. cause my strong interest.But many of them much of that [the splendid civilization and traditional technology] has have disappeared。I'm often disappointed by that to it.Comen on!

# Wonderful post!  I am also quite shy but am trying to be more outgoing.

# 你写的英文很不错!  我也很害羞,但是希望越来越积极。

 


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Life feeling

I'm a shy girl, but I want to be optimistic and brave girl. I often feel disturbed, becourse because unexpected things happen every day. I often think about how I can make life more meaningful. I want to go to a lot of places and experience the culture of different countries. I want to do lots of things, but how should I begin? I always dream I can change myself and my life. Many interesting things will happen. I don't need to be famous, but I hope to bring everyone happy。happiness to everyone. I don't know lots of things, so I need learn them. We can work together! I'm so proud that I can live in China. Here, the splendid civilization and traditional technology caused my strong interest in learning. But many of them those interests have disappeared. I'm often disppointed due to it this. Comn on!

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