A letter: A surprise party (118words) I decided to organize a surprise party for my friend, Ben then I'm going to write a letter to another friend, Bob to help me out. Dear Bob, I'm writing to tell y

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A letter: A surprise party (118words) I decided to organize a surprise party for my friend, Ben then I'm going to write a letter to another friend, Bob to help me out. Dear Bob, I'm writing to tell you about a surprise party I'm organizing. I'm going to throw the party at the weekend. I invited Ben, but I said to him it's just a home party. I have a plan for the party to give him a present. I learned from him he got a job, so I want to celebrate and make him surprise. I ask a favor of you keep it secret to him until the party begins. Let's celebrate him and enjoy the party!

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Hi there!

My corrections are in bold. I hope this helps!

Best wishes,

Matt

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A letter: A surprise party (118words)

I decided to organize a surprise party for my friend, Ben then I'm going to write a letter to another friend, Bob to help me out.

Dear Bob,
I'm writing to tell you about a surprise party I'm organizing. I'm going to throw the party at the weekend. I invited Ben, but I told him it's just a house party. I'm planning to give him a present at the party. I've heard he got a new job, so I want to celebrate and surprise him. Please keep it a secret from him until the party begins. Let's celebrate and enjoy the party!

A letter: a surprise party (118 words)

I decided to organize a surprise party for my friend, Ben, then I'm going to write a letter to another friend, Bob, who to can help me out.

Dear Bob,

I'm writing to tell you about a surprise party I'm organizing. I'm going to throw the party at on the weekend. I invited Ben, but I said to him it's just a home party. I have a plan for the party plan to give him a present during the party. I learned from him he got a job, He told me that he got secured a job, so I want to celebrate that and make him surprise him. I'm asking you for a favor a favor of you to keep it this a secret to from him until the party begins. Let's celebrate with him and enjoy the party!

I hope this helps!

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