Job problems
These days I reckon unemployment is a global phenomenon. The population of our world has been increasing so far, and it means the group of consumers has increased. But the group of suppliers hasn't increased as many as that of consumers since the machines has replaced our jobs. So the imbalance has started, this kind of global unemployment got started. It's generally serious in developed countries. Many companies move their factories to some countries which have low wages. So the people in developed countries are still the consumers, have to buy things and spend money but there are not many jobs.
Ah Jesus I need to stop now cause I need to leave the library. Please correct me. Thank you.
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These days, unemployment is a global phenomenon. The population of our world has been increasing so far, and it means the group of consumers has increased. But the group of suppliers hasn't increased as many as that of consumers since the machines has replaced instead of us. The rate of unemployment is dramatically rising. It is really a serious issue in developed countries which could increase the poverty in society. Many companies move their factories to some countries which have low wages, So the people in developed countries are still the consumers, have to buy things and spend money but the majority of them have not proper job or at all do not have any profession.
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Job Problems
These days, I reckon unemployment is a global phenomenon. The population of our world has been increasing so far, and it which means that the group number of consumers has increased. But the group number of suppliers hasn't increased as many much as that of consumers since the machines have/technology has replaced many of our jobs. So the imbalance has started, and this kind of global unemployment got started has escalated. It's generally serious in developed countries, where many companies move their factories to some other countries which have pay lower wages. So/therefore, the people in developed countries are still the consumers, have to who buy things/goods/products and spend money*, but there are not many jobs (for them).Ah Jesus I need to stop now cause I need to leave the library. Please correct me. Thank you.
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* 'spend money' is a bit redundant because you'd generally assume that money is spent when you buy things
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Job problems
These days I reckon unemployment is a global phenomenon. The population of our world has been increasing so far, and it means the group of consumers has increased. But the group of suppliers hasn't increased as many as that of consumers since the machines have replaced our jobs. So the imbalance has started. It's generally most serious in developed countries. Many companies move their factories to some countries which have low wages. So the people in developed countries are still the consumers, have to buy things and spend money but there are not many jobs.Ah Jesus I need to stop now cause I need to leave the library. Please correct me. Thank you.
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