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My plan to build and rebuild trust Today I watched a TED talk about how to build and rebuild truest.For empathy wobbles,the speaker gave us a solution.She said,the solution,super clear: technology,off and away.And that forced people to look up ,to look at the people in front of them,to listen to them,to immerse themselves in their perspectives and to collaborate in unprecedented ways. What's more,from now on,I will wear whatever makes me feel fabulous,pay less attention to what I think people want to hear from me and far more attention to what I authentic,awesome self need to say.

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My plan to build and rebuild trust

Today, I watched a TED Talk that was about how to build and rebuild trust. For/Since empathy wobbles/wavers, the speaker gave us a solution. She said, that the solution, was super clear: we need to turn technology, off and put it away. And That would forced people to look up, to look at the people in front of them, to listen to them, to immerse themselves in their perspectives, and to collaborate in unprecedented ways.
What's more, from now on, I will wear whatever makes me feel fabulous, pay less attention to what I think people want to hear from me and far more attention to what I - an authentic, and awesome self - need to say.

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Good job. Remember to insert a space between your commas and the word after. I hope this helps!

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