Essay 3 - Practice TOEFL iBT part 2
Secondly, if my friend is seriously considering switching careers, I would advise her to write a list of the jobs she is most interested in so that she could investigate further about them. This happened to my brother when he wanted to start doing something more challenging for him. He used to work as a digital illustrator but one day while recording a tutorial for YouTube, found out that he enjoyed teaching. As a result of that experience, my brother decided that he wanted to teach his illustration techniques online. But before creating his own tutorial channel he interviewed some colleagues that already had a channel and watched a lot of videos to know what it would be like. In the end, he realized that teaching was not for him. So, definitely, I would advise this to my friend.
In summary, if my friend is thinking to leave her job, but didn’t have any idea of what to do, I would suggest her to do some soul-searching for a better understanding of herself and to research as much as possible about the careers she is interested in.
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Essay 3 - Practice TOEFL iBT part 2
Secondly, if my friend is seriously considering to change of/to switch career, I would advise her to write a list of the jobs that most interest her/interest her most, so that, she could investigate further about them. This happened to my brother when he wanted to start doing something more challenging for him. He used to work as a digital illustrator but one day while recording a tutorial for YouTube, found out that he enjoyed teaching. As a result of that experience, my brother decided that he wanted to teach his illustration techniques online. But before creating his own tutorial channel he interviewed some colleagues that already had a channel and watched a lot of videos to know what it would be like. In the end, he realized that teaching was not for him. So, definitely, I would advise this to my friend.In summary, if my friend is thinking to leave her job, but didn’t have any idea of what to do, I would suggest her to do some soul-searching for a better understanding of herself and to research as much as possible about the careers she is interested in.
HELLO, THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR TEXT, I AM NOT A NATIVE ENGLISH SPEAKER, I MADE SOME CORRECTIONS THAT I THINK COULD SOUND BETTER AND I HOPE THAT THESE WILL BE USEFUL FOR YOU. IF THESE ARE NOT USEFUL, JUST IGNORE THEM, THE "/" IS FOR ADDING ANOTHER RIGHT OPTION (A SUGGESTION), THANK YOU.
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Essay 3 - Practice TOEFL iBT part 2
Secondly, if my friend is seriously considering switching careers, I would advise her to write a list of the jobs she is most interested in so that she could investigate them further. This happened to my brother when he wanted to start doing something more challenging for himself (but i would just leave "for himself" out.) He used to work as a digital illustrator but,( need comma here) one day while recording a tutorial for YouTube, found out that he enjoyed teaching. As a result of that experience, my brother decided that he wanted to teach his illustration techniques online. But, (comma) before creating his own tutorial channel, (comma) he interviewed some colleagues that already had a channel and watched a lot of videos to know what it would be like. In the end, he realized that teaching was not for him. So, definitely, I would advise this to my friend.In summary, if my friend is thinking to leave ("thinking of leaving" sounds better) her job, but didn’t have any idea of what to do, I would suggest her to do some soul-searching for a better understanding of herself and to research as much as possible about the careers she is interested in.
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