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About today I'd like to share a little bit about my day with you. Today I visited the Tomorrow's Museum in Rio de janeiro. It's located at Mauá square in the center of Rio de Janeiro city. The museum theme is the near future and it is focused on the many questions that arises from the global climate changing and the constantly increase in global population. Some of the key questions that the exhibition tries to answer are "How to feed the global population when we reach 10 billion people?", "How to produce and consume more efficiently?" and "How to be sustainable in global scale?" The main exhibition is divided into five part: "Cosmos", "Earth", "Anthropocene", "Tomorrows" and "Us". Each part gives us an understanding about how we got here, what we are now and where we are heading. The exhibition's purpose is to catch the attention of the visitors to the actions we need to take in place to stop unwanted events like the global warming and the food wasting. At the end of the exhibition you chose one out of 5 main atitudes you can take to start changing the world into a more sustainable place, and, based on the choice you make, you receive a pack of seeds to plant at your house. I've got lettuce seeds and my wife got arugula. I'm being succinct here, but you can get more information on the website. Just Google it.  If you ever find yourself in Rio, do pay a visite at the Museum. You won't regret it.

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About today

I'd like to share a little bit about my day with you.
Today I visited the Tomorrow's Museum Museum of Tomorrow in Rio de Janeiro. It's located at Mauá square in the center of Rio de Janeiro city.
The museum's theme is the near future and it is focused on the many questions that arises from the global climate changing and the constantly increase in global population. (or.. that arise from global climate change and the constantly increasing global population.)
Some of the key questions that the exhibition tries to answer are "How to feed the global population when we reach 10 billion people?", "How to produce and consume more efficiently?" and "How to be sustainable in on a global scale?"
The main exhibition is divided into five parts: "Cosmos", "Earth", "Anthropocene" [ a new word for me!! ;) ], "Tomorrows" and "Us". Each part gives us an understanding about how we got here, what we are now and where we are heading.
The exhibition's purpose is to catch draw the attention of the visitors to the actions we need to take in place (either 'take' or 'put in place') to stop unwanted events like the global warming and the food wasting food waste.
At the end of the exhibition you chose choose one out of 5 main attitudes you can take adopt to start changing the world into a more sustainable place, and, based on the choice you make, you receive a pack of seeds to plant at your house home.
I've got lettuce seeds and my wife got arugula.
I'm being succinct here, but you can get more information on the website. Just Google it. 
If you ever find yourself in Rio, do pay a visite at to the Museum. You won't regret it.


Well written, the museum sounds cool! Let me know if you have any questions about the corrections..

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