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Hi, I need help. I have a profile on Wattpad and I also want a description in English, but I am not fluent in the language. Can you help me?
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About: Hello, my name is Andressa and I'm 20. I'm in my first graduation (Tourism), besides that, I study Administration and English almost two years ago. I write from 2014, however during two years I was removed on account of a creative blockade. In this year of 2018, I returned to Wattpad dedicating myself even more in my stories and future projects with the goal of publishing a book soon. Although writing Romantic Fiction with Darks themes, I have ideas that fit perfectly into other genres that, perhaps, can put them on paper.
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Hi, I need help. I have a profile on Wattpad and I also want a description in English, but I am not fluent in the language. Can you help me?-----
About: Hello, my name is Andressa and I'm 20. I'm in my first graduation a graduate student (Tourism). besides Before that, I study studied Administration and English almost two years ago. I've write been writing from since 2014, however during for two years I was removed on account of a creative blockade *. In this year of 2018 This year I returned to Wattpad dedicating myself even more in to my stories and future projects with the goal of publishing a book soon. Although** Despite writing Romantic Fiction with Darks Dark (estas palavras não precisam ser maiúsculas) themes, I have ideas that fit perfectly into other genres that, perhaps, can put them be put on paper.
*não sei bem o que quer dizer - se se refere a um bloqueio de escritor, pode-se dizer 'I couldn't write/I stopped writing due to writer's block'
** Although é sempre seguida por um nome/pronome (I, she, the topic, etc.), e 'despite' tem o mesmo sentido mais é seguida por um gerúndio que terminam em -ing (ando/endo é o equivalente em português) --> (writing, running, taking, etc.)
Muito bem escrito dado o seu nível do idioma! Diria que a maioria dos seus erros devem-se á uma transliteração do português ao inglês, na qual não consideras as expressões que podem ser diferentes. Alguns exemplos - I write from 2014, during two years, that can put them on paper -- Expressões assim podem ser difíceis porque soam corretas para o ouvido português, mais há pequenas mudanças necessárias para que soem bem em inglês. Continua a ler e ouvir ingleses nativos para ter uma noção do que soa bem o mal.
Boa sorte e bem trabalho até agora!
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