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Letter Hi Luke, If I were you, I would talk about Francesco Totti. He is one of the best Italian football player ever. He's famous not only for being an amazing player but also for loving his team and his city more than anything else. He was the captain of Rome Football Team during 20 years, and he was one of the oldest strikers playing in the top leagues. Totti's history is something very special. He started playing football when he was a child and at the age of 18 he played his first match in Rome. He was a pure talent and all the best football clubs in the world wanted him to play in their team. Nonetheless, he rejected playing with other clubs and promised to play in Rome forever, and this is what really happened. Last year he stopped playing football, and it was a huge loss for Italian football. Why don't you talk about Totti in your presentation? See you soon. Agostino

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Hi Luke,

If I were you, I would talk about Francesco Totti. He is one of the best Italian football player ever.
He's famous not only for being an amazing player but also for loving his team and his city more than anything else.
He was the captain of Rome's football team for 20 years, and he was one of the oldest strikers playing in the top leagues. Totti's history is something very special.
He started playing football when he was a child, and at the age of 18, he played his first match in Rome.
He was a pure talent, and all the best football clubs in the world wanted him to play in their team.
Nonetheless, he rejected playing with other clubs and promised to play in Rome forever, and this is what really happened.
Last year he stopped playing football, and it was a huge loss for Italian football.
Why don't you talk about Totti in your presentation?


See you soon,

Agostino


Good job writing your letter. I found it to be informative and on topic. I noticed a few errors and corrected them for you. I look forward to seeing more from you.

Teacher Keevan :-)

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