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Letter to Chris (From PET exam sample) Dear Chris, I'm writing to thank you for the invitation to Mr.Brown's party, I'll be there at 7.30 P.M. If you want, I can help you prepare something for the party. I could cook a Sicilian dish and I could also create a music playlist with Mr. Brown's favourite tracks. Have you already thought about a present to buy? Mr. Brown loves musical instruments, we could give him a new guitar! Let me know what do you think about it and see you soon. Love, Agostino

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Hi Agostino,

The only thing I would add to Ina's excellent corrections is a note about "Love" at the end.  

You started the note with, "I'm writing to thank you ....." which suggests quite a formal letter.  In other words, a letter to someone you don't know very well.  However "Love" at the end of a message is very informal and only usually used between very good friends or family.  You could try ending your message with "Kind regards" or "Best wishes".  

Best wishes

Jill

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Letter to Chris (From PET exam sample)

Dear Chris,

I'm writing to thank you for the invitation to Mr.Brown's party. I'll be there at 7.30 P.M.
If you want, I can help you prepare something for the party. I could cook a Sicilian dish. I could also create a music playlist with Mr. Brown's favourite tracks.
Have you decided what to buy him yet? Mr. Brown loves musical instruments. We could get him a new guitar!
Let me know what do you think about it. See you soon.

Love,

Agostino

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