letter
Dear Mom and Dad,
We are writing to send you congratulations on your cruise, we hope you have a good time, and that this letter will reach you when you arrive in Port-au-Prince.
We include a drawing of your grandchildren where they send you greetings and wish you happiness on your anniversary trip.
Greetings from home,
Pedro.
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letter
Dear Mom and Dad,We are writing to send you congratulations on your cruise. We hope you have a good time, and that this letter will reach you when you arrive in Port-au-Prince.
We include a drawing by your grandchildren where they send you greetings and wish you happiness on your anniversary trip.
Greetings from home,
Pedro
Diana, this is nearly perfect and reads very naturally. I've suggested only two changes.
1. I broke your first sentence into two sentences, because they express two distinct thoughts: why you are writing, and what you hope.
2. A drawing of the grandchildren: they are pictured in the drawing
A drawing by the grandchildren: they are the artists
A drawing from the grandchildren: they are offering or sending you the drawing.
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