B2 Practicing English
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I am taking part in an English challenge, This week, I have to write a text. It is never too late. Here is the text. I need some feedback about my skills. Thank you for you help!
Attached letter to CV
Dear Hiring Manager,
I read your job posting for Investment Analyst with interest. I am confident that my five years of experience in international audit company suit the position.
In my position as Audit Assistant and In-charge of projects I worked on checking financial statements on different areas: retail, metal production, real estate, general manufacturers, insurance, NGO, IT and Communications, sports.
I took part in all stages of audit, compile the financial statements according to International Financial Reporting Standards, analyzed businesses plans and investors availability. As In-charge of projects I build the process of audit team, made communication with client, sum up the results and budget projects. As pro-active part of team I take part in improving internal processes by applying special forms of reports.
In addition the above information during last 6 years I took part in international youth organization, where i had been volunteering as event-organizer in international projects, which makes me used to work in international team.
If I can provide you with any further information on my background and qualifications, please let me know.
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B2 Practicing English
Hi!I am taking part in an English challenge, This week, I have to write a text. It is never too late. Here is the text. I need some feedback about my skills. Thank you for you help!
Attached letter to CV
Dear Hiring Manager,
I read your job posting for a Investment Analyst position with interest. I am confident that my five years of experience in international audit company suit the position.
In my position as Audit Assistant and In-charge of projects I worked on checking financial statements on different areas: retail, metal production, real estate, general manufacturers, insurance, NGO('s), IT and communications, sports.
I took part in all stages of auditing, compiling the financial statements according to International Financial Reporting Standards, analyzed businesses plans and investors availability. As In-charge of projects I build the process of the audit team, made communication with client, sum up the results and budget projects. As a pro-active part of team I take part in improving internal processes by applying special forms of reports.
In addition the above information during last 6 years I took part in international youth organization, where i had been volunteering as event-organizer in international projects, which makes me used to work in international team.
If you are interested in any further information on my background and qualifications, please let me know.
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