Weekend
In last weekend I visited my parents and grandma. We celebrated my dad's birthday and spent a good time together. Then I returned to Saint Petersburg with a one day stop in Moscow. I arrived early morning on a train, had a good breakfast and went to my job office. At end of working day I went to another train station. There was I had a good cup of coffee and left Moscow on a fast train Sapsan. During of my travelling I watched the interesting movie. It called Capharnaum.
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Weekend
Last weekend I visited my parents and grandma. We celebrated my dad's birthday and had a good time together. Then I returned to Saint Petersburg with a one day stop in Moscow. I arrived in the early morning by train, had a good breakfast and went to my office job. At the end of the working day I went to another train station. There I had a good cup of coffee and left Moscow on a fast Sapsan train. During my travelling I watched an interesting movie. It was called Capharnaum.-"In last weekend" is not correct. Just say "Last weekend".
-"spent a good time" is understandable but not correct. You could say "spent quality time together" but it is more natural to say "had a good time".
-"job office" is backwards, say "office job".
-"There was I had" is not correct. Just say "There I had" or "I had".
-"train Sapsan" is backwards.
-"the interesting movie" is not correct if you don't name it right away. So you could say "I watched the interesting movie Capharnaum." But if you don't name it until the next sentence you should say "an interesting movie".
-"it called Capharnaum" is not correct. You should say "It is called..." if you intend to go on to talked about it. Or "It was called..." if you just wanted to inform the reader of the name and that's it.
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Weekend
In last weekend I visited my parents and grandma. We celebrated my dad's birthday and spent had a good time together. Then I returned to Saint Petersburg with a one day stop in Moscow. I arrived early morning on a train, had a good breakfast and went to my job office office. At end of working day I went to another train station. There was I had a good (try to find other ways to say "good", like delicious) cup of coffee and left Moscow on a fast train Sapsan. During of my travelling On the train, I watched the an interesting movie. It was called, "Capharnaum".Want to progress faster?
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