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You are what you eat I think healthy diet is essential for everyone. Eating more healthy food like vegetables and fruits is important to improve both our physical and mental health. Junk food including candy, potato chips and fried chickens etc are something I only indulge myself in once in a while. Some of my friends call me health freak. I think it is totally worth it as I believe you are what you eat. Recently I read an interesting article about this topic . According to what I read, scientists have cast new light on the effects our diet has on our mental health. The study found that what we ate can affect and alter our brain chemistry. This explains why some people are more emotionally stable and resilient than others.

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I think a healthy diet is essential for everyone. Eating healthy foods like vegetables and fruits are important to improve both our physical and mental health. Junk food, including candy, potato chips and fried chicken, etc. is something I only indulge in once in a while. Some of my friends call me a health freak, but I think it is totally worth it because I believe that you are what you eat. Recently I read an interesting article about this topic . According to what I read, scientists have cast new light on the effects that our diet has on our mental health. The study found that what we eat can affect and alter our brain chemistry. This explains why some people are more emotionally stable and resilient than others.

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You are what you eat

I think a healthy diet is essential for everyone. Eating more healthy food like vegetables and fruits is important to improve both our physical and mental health.
Junk food including candy, potato chips and fried chickens etc... are is something I only indulge myself in  with once in a while. Some of my friends call me a health freak. I think it is totally worth it as I believe you are what you eat.
Recently I read an interesting article about this topic . According to what I read, scientists have cast new light on the effects our diet has on our mental health. The study found that what we eat can affect and alter our brain chemistry. This explains why some people are more emotionally stable and resilient than others.


Great Writing! 

Stephanie.

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Could anyone help correct my gramma. If there are other ways which are more natural, you can teach me .Thank you!

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