Please, give me advice

I'm trying to practice using this vocabulary in my writing.

Instantly adv.
aggressive a.
passive a.
initial a.
forgetfully adv.
extraordinary a.
Strict a.
Vanish
Occasionally

Today is another day. This is my 5th week in EBA, I like the weather here. For this page, I wanna describe my friends in this school: 
Vita, Tana, Tomo, Rie. They are my best friends in EBA. I’m thankful I’ve encountered them in 2019.

Tana strives to improve his speaking skills and is aggressive in learning different language. He always repeats after me instantly when I speak Chinese.

Vita is the only Taiwanese friend I have in EBA. I’m so proud of her because she didn’t speak English well when we initially met each other on the first day. She needs to organize the vocabulary occasionally then (before) she can speak. She is a forgetful woman. She checks everything when we go out. (I think this is what you meant. Correct me if I’m wrong.)  

Rie seems like a passive girl to me. She is extraordinary. When I met her for the first time in class, I could feel that she is very strict with herself while she studying. (Linguistically, this description of Rie contradicts itself. She is either passive or strict with herself. I don’t know if she can be both. 🤷‍♀️ Just a thought!) 

Tomo is like my grandfather. He will never vanish around me because we are roommates. Actually, he is studying harder than me. I would definitely say that he can accomplish any mission that he wants.

This was good, Stan. I hope that my corrections help you. Let me know if you have any questions.😃

~Grace