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about me My name is Ian. I'm a native Taiwanese, currently studying in third year of Computer Science at TamKang Univesity in New Taipei City. In my spare time, I usually write programs to reinforce my logic to solve some problems. The reason I decided to major in CS is that my father was an electronics engineer so that I've got much knowledge about enginneering from him. And this finally resulted in my attempt to make this choice. In the future, I will decide to be a software engineer because of my passion for programming.

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about me

My name is Ian. I'm a native Taiwanese, currently studying in (the) third year of Computer Science at TamKang Univesity in New Taipei City. In my spare time, I usually write programs to reinforce my logic to solve some problems. The reason I decided to major in CS is that my father was an electronics engineer so that I've got much knowledge about (on) enginneering from him. And this finally resulted in my attempt to make this choice (decision). In the future, I will decide to be a software engineer because of my passion for programming.
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about me

My name is Ian. I'm a native Taiwanese, currently studying in my third year of studying Computer Science at TamKang University in New Taipei City. In my spare time, I usually write programs to reinforce my logic to solve some problems. The reason I decided to major in CS is that my father was an electronics engineer so that I've got much knowledge learned a lot about enginneering from him. And this finally resulted in my attempt to make this choice helped me make the decision to study CS. In the future, I will decide to be a software engineer because of my passion for programming.


Hi Ian,

I wasn't quite sure from your writing if you have already decided to be a SW Engineer, or you will decide that in the future.

Anyway, other than that it is completely understandable, with just a few changes to make it sound more natural.

Let me know if you have any questions about these corrections.

By the way, I also studied CS; it's a great choice!

John

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