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Mass media I’m going to talk about mass media. The mass media have improved with the passing of the time. Thanks to advance of the techonologies, they had evoluted a lot. There are a lot of mass media like: Tv, press, radio or internet…but I usually use internet because it’s a place where I can informate me everything and learn to anything, also I use the TV when I have lunch of dinner and I listen the news. However, before I used to informate with the physical press but now it is not necessary because I use the internet. When I see the TV a like many series and reality show, for example, now I’m watching the Masterchef is a cook show where the contestans fight to be a chef, after that before I saw a series it’s called “Stranger Things” on Netflix but I couldn’t continue to see it because I finish my susbription on Netflix. On the other part, the mass media there are several disadvantages because they show us advertising everytime either TV, internet or other mass media, and sometimes it’s too molest, in fact it this advertinsing sometimes forbiden to enter in pages. My point of view, I’d change the use of advertising because it is abussive and many times it is useless. It’s true that the adverting sometimes can help us, but in general it is too bothersome. By the contrary, the online news is another problem especially the fakes news. The online news is very important to know the problems in other parts of the world, but into the internet, we can find everything and a lot of time it’s fake news. In addtion, this fake news are having many relevance in our lifes, because people believe everything. In conclusion, I have showed my opinion about mass media and so, the problems that there are.

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Mass media

I’m going to talk about mass media. Mass media has improved with the passing of the time. Thanks to advances in  techonologies, they had evolved a lot. There are a lot of mass media like: TV, press, radio or internet…but I usually use internet because it’s a place where I can get information on everything and learn to anything. I also I use the TV when I have lunch or dinner and I listen the news. However, before I used to get my news with the physical press but now it is not necessary because I use the internet.

When I see the TV,  like many series and reality show, for example, now I’m watching the MasterChef.  It is a cook show where the contestants fight to be a chef. After that before I saw a series it’s called “Stranger Things” on Netflix but I couldn’t continue to watch it because I finish my susbription on Netflix.


On the other hand, the mass media haseveral disadvantages because they show us advertising every time either on TV, internet or other mass media, and sometimes it’s too much, in fact it this advertising sometimes forbidden to enter in pages.


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My point of view, I’d change the use of advertising because it is abussive and many times it is useless. It’s true that the adverting sometimes can help us, but in general it is too bothersome.
By the contrary, the online news is another problem especially the fakes news. The online news is very important to know the problems in other parts of the world, but into the internet, we can find everything and a lot of time it’s fake news. In addtion, this fake news are having many relevance in our lifes, because people believe everything.
In conclusion, I have showed my opinion about mass media and so, the problems that there are.

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