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Buddy 111 was paying close attention to the almost hundred years old behavior and was waiting for a sign. He was programmed to adjust to voices, movements and of course emotions as well. During acclimatization, the one-meter height robots settings were specially accorded to the newcomers own personalities .When it came to Pasquale, patience and poise were the key words. He was one of these men who couldn’t cope with that whole robot-era scenario.
“Today’s agenda foresees a one hour shooting practice. I am looking forward sharing that moment with you. Thanks to your grandson President Quentin Lapidus’ generosity, a firing range has been specially designed just for Metallic Silhouette Shooting.”
“What q stunner!” exclaimed Pasquale in a burst of laugh. “Would it be possible, Queenie, to replace the chickens, pigs, turkeys and rams with a different kind of metallic items?”.
“You’re leaving me speechless Pasquale, what a unique great sense of humor!”
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Buddy 111 was paying close attention to the near-centenarian's behaviour (for Br Eng) (I think this is what you mean by "almost hundred years old behavior" - which otherwise could correct to "almost hundred year old's behavior"), and was waiting for a sign. He was programmed to adjust to voices, movements and of course emotions ( do you need the "as well" as well as the "and"?) . During acclimatization, the one-meter height robots' (after the plural "s" if this is for many robots, as I think you mean) settings were specially adjusted to the newcomers' (do you need "own" ...? Or you might consider "particular" ) personalities. When it came to Pasquale, patience and poise were the key words. He was one of those men (I don't know why, but this usage takes "those") who couldn’t cope with that whole robot-era scenario.“Today’s agenda foresees a one hour shooting practice. I am looking forward to sharing that moment with you. Thanks to your grandson President Quentin Lapidus’ generosity, a firing range has been specially designed just for Metallic Silhouette Shooting.”
“What a stunner!” (often this exclamation is used in appreciation of an attractive person, rather than of stunning news) exclaimed Pasquale in a burst of laughter. “Would it be possible, Queenie, to replace the chickens, pigs, turkeys and rams with a different kind of metallic items?” (singular after "different kind of", and only one closing punctuation mark around the end of inverted commas)
“You’re leaving me speechless, Pasquale. What a unique great sense of humor!”
I don't have any idea where you are going with this story (which can be good), but it is intriguing, and no doubt a different framework for learning ...
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Buddy 111 was paying close attention to the almost one hundred year old behavior and was waiting for a sign. He was programmed to adjust to voices, movements and of course emotions as well. During acclimatization, the one-meter high robot's settings were specially adjusted to the newcomers own personalities .When it came to Pasquale, patience and poise were the key words. He was one of those men who couldn’t cope with that whole robot-era scenario.“Today’s agenda shows a one hour shooting practice. I am looking forward to sharing that moment with you. Thanks to your grandson President Quentin Lapidus’ generosity, a firing range has been specially designed just for Metallic Silhouette Shooting.”
“What a stunner!” exclaimed Pasquale in a burst of laughter. “Would it be possible, Queenie, to replace the chickens, pigs, turkeys and rams with a different kind of metallic item?”.
“You’re leaving me speechless Pasquale, what a unique and great sense of humor!”
Some nice work here, just a few corrections
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