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I`m Economist for profession but I get passion for sewing and fashion I don’t remember when was the first time that I sewed a woven, but I can remain how I beg to my grandma to give me a needle and thread, so far, I was terrific when in High School, my workshop was dressmaking. There, I made my first basic skirt and jacket; the cuff of a sleeve was narrow and it tight me, so I learned to use a sewing machine, even I had a machine before, but it was a toy. I was happy for two years, because my mom moved me to another school and my new workshop was “shorthanded typing”—Yes- It`s sound old fashioned, but I still belong to that generation. I just learned a few sings of stenography however I could type with the hole fingers. I practiced a lot and I injured both little fingers, the school`s change was not good for me, I was very sad. Even though, I decided to study Fashion Designer, in Senior High School I met a professor, she was economist and we got along very well, in fact, she encouraged me in order to study Economy. She said “you are very smart and you should study a career more theoretical” so I believed her. to be continued

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I`m Economist for profession but I get passion for sewing and fashion

I don’t remember when was the first time that I sewed a woven, (it isn't correct to use "woven" as a noun.  It is either a verb - "I have woven this cloth" or an adjective, "The woven cloth is very beautiful."  but I can remain remember how I begged to my grandma to give me a needle and thread. So far, I was felt terrific when in my high school, dressmaking my workshop was dressmaking. 
There, I made my first basic skirt and jacket; the cuffs of the sleeves were narrow and it tight on me, so I learned to use a sewing machine. even I had owned a machine before, but it was only a toy.


I was happy for two years, because my mom moved me to another school and my new workshop was “shorthanded typing.” Yes-, it sounds old-fashioned, but I still belong to that generation.


I just learned a few sings of stenography however, I could type with the hole all of my fingers.
I practiced a lot and I injured both little fingers, so the school`s change of schools was not good for me. I was very sad so 
Even though, I decided to study Fashion Designer, . in Senior High School I met a professor, she who was an economist and she and I got along very well. In fact, she encouraged me in order to study Economics. She said,  “You are very smart and you should study for a career that is more theoretical,” so I believed her


to be continued  (You seem to have a lot of problems with using commas incorrectly.)




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