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A day in my room
Today is Tuesday, March 19th, 2019. I've spent 22 hours staying in my room doing some unimportant stuff. Facebook shared a photo with me which reminded me of this day 2 years ago, I had one of the most memorable moments with my awesome girls in Holi - a colorful Indian festival.However, today is a totally different day. I am all alone doing boring things in my small cold room. I can create my joy but my satisfaction comes mostly from my surrounding vibe and the people who I hang out with. My friend warned me that I would become a "Hikikomori", which is a person who doesn't go out and is addicted to the internet, if I keep following this lifestyle.
It's not my own problem or at least in some perspectives, it is not a problem. I did not take my friend's advice seriously as I know some people whose jobs are mostly indoor activities like researchers. I won't become a Hikikomori. I am sure of what I am saying. I just took today to free myself from work.
Today's weather was so beautiful and lively. When I noticed a little light green bird dancing on the branch of pink blossoms through my window, I did want to join with her. It would have been great if I had worn a pastel pink dress and walked down the street. Life is so wonderful. I can't wait to see the sunrise and get the first ray of warm spring sunlight.
Some really nice language here, well done. I moved one phrase and changed it to make it more natural and changed a few words, again to make it more natural
Best wishes
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