Computer games teach us nothing
Nowadays the problem of computer games causes great arguments and controversy. Some people believe that computer games are teach us a lot of important and useful things while others think that computer games are waste of time and money.
In my opinion, computer games is useless occupation in our lives. Firstly, spending a lot of time in computer you would can get obese and impaired vision. Secondly, many modern games contain violence and cruelty. Now, children playing in computer games become cruel and aggressive. Moreover, modern computer games haven't useful information and absolutely teach us nothing.
However, some other people think that computer games is the best way for spending time. They claim that it teach us strategy and ingenuity. Besides, computer games develop memory.
Nevertheless, I can't agree with this opinion because there are many other ways for spending time. For example, you can read book or learning foreign language. In addition, computer games teach us strategy in a fantasy world. Finally, scientists discovered that computer games destroy nervous system.
In conclusion, I would like to say that computer games are waste of time and healthy. You can always read a good detective or roman, watch unforgettable film or play sports. Don't spend your time in fantasy world!
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Computer games teach us nothing
Nowadays the problem issue* of computer games causes great arguments and controversy. Some people believe that computer games are teach us a lot of important and useful things while others think that computer games are waste of time and money.Note: It could be 'are teachING' and 'are A waste of...' as well.
In my opinion, computer games is are a useless preoccupation in our lives. Firstly, spending a lot of time in on a computer you would can get become obese and have impaired vision. Secondly, many modern games contain violence and cruelty. Now, children playing in computer games become cruel and aggressive. Moreover, modern computer games haven't don't have useful information and absolutely teach us nothing.
('occupation' is a job for money, usually, whereas 'preoccupation' is something that takes your time)
However, some other people think that computer games is are the best way for spending time. They claim that it teaches us strategy and ingenuity. Besides, computer games develop memory.
Nevertheless, I can't agree with this opinion because there are many other ways for spending time. For example, you can read book or learning foreign languages. In addition, computer games teach us strategy in a fantasy world. Finally, scientists discovered that computer games destroy our nervous system.
In conclusion, I would like to say that computer games are waste of time and healthy. You can always read a good detective or romance book, watch unforgettable film or play sports. Don't spend your time in fantasy world!
* -- I changed 'problem' to 'issue' since the story is about whether computer games are a problem or not. By using 'problem' it biases the article to say they are a problem. Hope this makes sense...
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