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Young people pay too much attention to fashion Nowadays the problem of fashion cause great arguments and controversy. Some young people believe that fashion is necessity for modern lifestyle and they can't image their life without fashion. Others think that fashion is useless thing and waste of time and money. In my opinion, many teenagers pay too much attention to fashion. Firstly, they make very expensive purchases in pursuit of fashion. Young people wants modern technology, brand clothes and luxury travel. Secondly, many fashionable teenagers become selfish and rebellious because parents spoiled them with presents. Moreover, modern fashion can dangerous for health. However, there exists another point of view on this issue. Fashion is one way to receive respect among friends and classmates. Besides, fashion cloth can be a way of expressions. In addition, young people think that in present world you should be in fashion. Nevertheless, I cannot agree with this opinion because you can't to receive respect with the help of fashion. You have to earn respect by doing. Furthermore, in modern life you can express yourself others ways. For example, you can create your image. Besides, nowadays fashion is changeable and you can't keep up with her. In conclusion, I would like to say that young people should payless attention. Nowadays fashion is very expensive and useless. You always can create your image. You have many another's ways for express yourself. Now, you don't be fashionable to be successful and gorgeous.

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Young people pay too much attention to fashion

Nowadays the problem of fashion causes great arguments and controversy. Some young people believe that fashion is a necessity for modern lifestyle and they can't image their life without fashion it (to avoid being redundant). Others think that fashion is a useless thing and a waste of time and money.
In my opinion, many teenagers pay too much attention to fashion. Firstly, they make very expensive purchases in pursuit of fashion. Young people wants (people is conjugated just like "they") modern technology, brand clothes ("brand" is not adjective, unless you say "brand-new") and luxurious travel. Secondly, many fashionable teenagers become selfish and rebellious because parents spoiled (general fact in the present tesne) them with presents. Moreover, modern fashion can be dangerous for health.
However, there exists another point of view on this issue (you can either say: "(...)there is another(...)" or "(...) another point of view on this issue exists"). Fashion is one way to receive/earn respect among friends and classmates. Besides, fashion clothes can be a way of expressions. In addition, young people think that in the present world you should be in fashion.
Nevertheless, I cannot agree with this opinion because you can't to receive respect with the help of fashion. You have to earn respect by doing (by doing what?). Furthermore, in modern life you can express yourself in others ways/ by other means (both are fine). For example, you can create your own  image. Besides, nowadays fashion is changeable and you can't keep up with her it.
In conclusion, I would like to say that young people should pay (space) less attention to it. Nowadays being in fashion (because you cannot "buy" fashion in a literal way) is very expensive and useless. You always can can always create your image. You have many another's other ways for express yourself. Now, you don't need to be fashionable to be successful and gorgeous.

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