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Correct my mistakes please!!! Please correct my mistakes!!!😊😊😊 Some people believe that nowdays we have a very busy and fast lifestyle. They suppose that fast food is one of the major reasons. People eat on the go, they prefer eating in McDonalds instead of eating homemade food. And the second major reason why our life is so fast is technology. People live in a virtual world. They spend a lot of time for communicating via computers and phones. Some scientists see two big problems relate to health and social life. 😥😓😔😏 But I belive that our life is so fast not because of fast food or technology. I suppose it's because of work😁😁😉. People work a lot. Most of them work 5 days in a week from morning till evening. After their work they try to get home of course during the rush hour when there are a lot of traffic jams and it takes a lot of time to get home. They don't have any time and forces and may be desire to take their time and enjoy cooking or shopping or communicating. They have to rest and tomorrow go to work again😥😝. I belive that fast food and technology only help people!!! Of course if you are not addicted to them😜. Only at weekend we can invite our friends or family, cook smth tasty or go out and enjoy the food and the people you are eating with.I can't imagine how it will be complicated if we don't have any technology and if we can't talk to each other via the Internet or phone😌. We'll be in a hurry all the time and we won't be able to work and make money.😓

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Some people believe that nowdays nowadays we have a very busy and fast lifestyle. They suppose that fast food is one of the major reasons. People eat on the go, and they prefer eating in at McDonalds instead of eating homemade food. And The second major reason why our life is so fast is technology. People live in a virtual world. They spend a lot of time for communicating via computers and phones. Some scientists see two big problems relate related to health and social life. But I belive believe that our life is so fast not because of fast food or technology, I suppose it's because of work. People work a lot. Most of them work 5 days in a week from morning till evening. After their work they try to get home of course during the rush hour when there are a lot of traffic jams and it takes a lot of time to get home. They don't have any time and forces energy and may be maybe desire to take their time and to enjoy cooking or shopping or communicating. They have to rest and tomorrow go to work again. I belive believe that fast food and technology only help people!!! Of course, if you are  you're not addicted to them. Only at the weekend we can  can we invite our friends or family, cook smth tasty or go out and enjoy the food and the people you are eating with. I can't imagine how it will be complicated complicated it would be if we don't didn't have any technology and if we can't couldn't talk to each other via the Internet or phone. We'll We'd be in a hurry all the time and we won't wouldn't be able to work and make money.

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