Sightseeing in sydney Australia
This picture is Darling Harbour at Sydney .
It's very beautiful buildings and shopping center .
Many people walked at bridge and take a picture with friends .
I want to go there again .
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Sightseeing in Sydney Australia
This picture is from Darling Harbour at in Sydney Australia.It's has very beautiful buildings and a shopping center.
Many people walked at to the bridge and to take a picture with friends.
I want to go there again.
Your story gives people an idea of what Sydney Australia is like and it sounds like you had a good time.
Keep practicing your writing. Good luck.
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Your english is very good Yasuhiro! I have made a few corrections for you :)
Sightseeing in Sydney, Australia
This picture was taken in Darling Harbour in Sydney .It's very beautiful, with buildings and a shopping centre.
Many people walked on the bridge and took pictures with their friends.
I want to go there again .
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