About Carnival
Carnival is my favorite holiday. It's a big celebration here,in Brazil. It always starts on a Friday afternoon and ends on a Wednesday ,at noon. We call it Ash Wednesday. Carnival is great: you can party for five days.
There are many events during Carnival. In my city,Rio, the principal event is the parade of samba schools. The parade is really a competition between the samba schools. Each samba school has a theme and they parade at Sambódromo, singing and dancing.
I love Carnival, because it's when I have a chance to hang out with friends, dress up, dance all day and meet new people.
#carnival #holiday #braziliancarnival
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About Carnival
Carnival is my favorite holiday. It's a big celebration here in Brazil. It always starts on a Friday afternoon and ends on a Wednesday at noon. We call it Ash Wednesday. Carnival is great! You can party for five days!There are many events during Carnival. In my city Rio, the principal ('main' is more natural here) event is the parade of samba schools. The parade is really a competition between the samba schools. Each samba school (or you could just say 'Each one') has a theme and they parade at Sambódromo, singing and dancing.
I love Carnival because it's (when I have) (you don't need this) a chance to hang out with friends, dress up, dance all day and meet new people.
#carnival #holiday #braziliancarnival
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