today's happening I wake up at 8 today, and I'm doing my homework. And suddenly the WiFi has downed. I had no idea what happened but I realize. Everything using elect can't use! Maybe there were some

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today's happening I wake up at 8 today, and I'm doing my homework. And suddenly the WiFi has downed. I had no idea what happened but I realize. Everything using elect can't use! Maybe there were some trouble in our apartment. Anyway I can use WiFi right now. I'm staying with my host family in Toronto. I hope there is no more trouble in our house. If someone live in Toronto, let's be friends! Thank you

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Today's Events

I woke (past tense) up at 8 today and I was (past tense) doing my homework when
And suddenly the WiFi was down (= WiFi was off). I had no idea what happened but I soon found out.
There was a problem with power (= electricity)!
Maybe there was some problem (sounds more appropriate than "trouble" in this context) in our apartment.
Anyway, I can use WiFi right now.

I'm staying with my host family in Toronto. I hope there is no more problems in our house (you said "apartment" earlier. House and apartment are two different things).
If someone lives in Toronto, we could be friends!

Thank you. (we end sentences with a period [.])

today's happening

What happened today

I wake up at 8 today, and I'm wasdoing my homework.
And suddenly the WiFi has went downed. I had no idea what happened but I realize.
Everything using elect can't use!

but then I realized everything that was electric was not working (you could just say “there was a power outage”)

Maybe there were was some trouble something wrong in our apartment.
Anyway Anyways,I can use WiFi right now.

I'm staying with my host family in Toronto. I hope there is no more trouble in our house.
If someone live in Toronto, let's be friends!

Thank you

Thank you Dei:) I'll do my best!

Very nice, simple entry. Look at the corrections you got, they're very good. Remember to use past tense and the verb always goes after the subject "I". 頑張って　；）

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