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Camping I went camping with my sister before yesterday and it was really fun! It was my first time to go camping and I will try again next holiday absolutely. Go camping is really made me feel relaxed. After arriving the camp site,we started to set up the tent and then reading in the sunshine. It was so comfortable that we can enjoy the nature. Everything was fine in this experience but the sleeping bag was too hard to sleep so everyone got up early. Maybe we should bring some pads next time.

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Camping

I went camping with my sister the day before yesterday and it was really fun!
It was my first time to go  camping and I will definitely/absolutely try it again next holiday absolutely.
Go cCamping is really made me feel relaxed.
After arriving at the camp site, we started to set up the tent and then reading we read in the sunshine.
It was so comfortable that we can to enjoy the nature.
Everything was fine in this experience but the sleeping bag was too hard to sleep in so everyone got up early.
Maybe we should bring some pads next time.


Hi! Just a quick comment, don´t forget prepositions! :)

Btw, i love camping too!

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