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Can you check my English text regarding globalization ? It was writen by me . Thank you The learning of the English language is a subject of great importance within the process of globalization, because this language can be considered as a universal language, which is used by millions of people all over the world, to break the language barriers and so be able to express ideas or thoughts in the political, economic, social and cultural fields. Much of the information relevant to society (content in books, films and even on the Internet) is written in English, what justifies its influence and importance in the globalization process. It can also be said that the great mass media, that exert great influence within society use the English language as form of communication. At the same time, this language is essential to develop any type of commercial relationshipanywhere in the world . Moreover, the fact of mastering this language facilitates the possibility to opt for better jobs.

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The English language is a subject of great importance within the converstaion surrounding globalization This is because English is used as a Lingua Franca by millions of people all over the world. English is used to overcome language barriers and to be able to express ideas or thoughts in the political, economic, social and cultural fields. Much of the information relevant to society (content in books, films and even on the Internet) is written in English, this helps justify its influence and importance in the globalization process. It can also be said that the media that exerts its influence on society uses the English language as form of communication. At the same time, this language is essential to develop any type of commercial relationship anywhere in the world. Moreover, mastering this language opens doors to better job opportunities.

Great Job. Most of what I added was for flow and for punctuation, but you seem to have an excellent grasp of English grammar.

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