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rain and frozen It was still raining today, from mornnig to night, it likes that unless water was squeezed by a huge sponge all the time. everywhere are wet and frozen, which makes me felt cold from skin into bone. I found my lost friends back, it really nice to be asked how's going to someone again. why people want to be care and understand? I have on idea abut it, but I suppose that is where happiness comes from. even though it is a tiny tiny one. birds still visit our garden everyday, particularly, sparrows come very frequently, they hind under the canopy in groups, which made noise. they flew away immidiately as long as someone comes.

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rain and frozen

It has been raining (or "it rained') today, from morning to night. It's as if water was (being) squeezed by a huge sponge all the time. It is wet and frozen everywhere, which makes me feel cold from skin into my bones.

I  got my lost friends back. It is really nice to be asked 'how's it going' by someone again. why do people want to be cared about and understood ? I have an idea about it I suppose that is where happiness comes from. even though it is a tiny tiny one. (unclear what the "is" here refers to -- happyiness?)

birds still visit our garden every day, particularly sparrows, who come very frequently. They hide under the canopy in groups, which made noise (see below). They fly away immediately as soon as someone comes by/along/near.


notes and alternates:

It has been raining (or "it rained') today, from morning to night,  - you can also say: "I rained the whole/entire day, from early morning through the evening."

I  got my lost friends back - I found my friends again - 

 They hide under the canopy in groups, which made noise (see below). 
They hide under the canopy in groups and make noise -- here, the birds make the noise.
They hide under the canopy, which makes noise. -- here, the canopy makes noise.

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