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How to deal with daily problems. Many times I lose myself in wonders. Many questions without any answer or a very intrincated one. Typically common one. There are things wich comes about to certain people, and it is absolutely unfair that it happens in that way. It can be fail desitions we made, faliures in our desitions or things we could had never get out of it. In one way or another I would had been matter of time their development. Usually I prone to cling wondering myself why life is so unfairly in certain aspects? I´ve runned out with People who don´t deserve such dreadful episodes or suffering illness wich defenitely should not be playing an active role in those scenarios. There are a lot of unfairness throughout their lives. People tends to be not emphatic whit situations wich are not directly realeted with them. And many times it is true taht they can even are able to draw a comparison between their lives and the other´s lives. In other cases it became in a final step, where something pretty similar is founded in their life. And that is the moment when they surprisingly turn into in a blank canvas. The first reaction is set out ourselves in a journey were we can be easily depicted as If we were beings absolutely reluctant to accept the thing or even more.. it seems that our actitud will never change. An arrogant or unyielding actitud wich its only duty reseamble to stay in that mood forever. I consider the only way to cuts down the negative effects or consecuences of whatever be the problem we need to deal with is: trying to take it in as soon as it would have possible. After a while it is not as diffucult come back to reality. Because the roughest time has gone and those thought that you had put backwards are in life once again. The difference is that now it is easy to visualize a new Landscape.. The staff we have stumbled across, turned into new oportunities to take advantages of them and recognize and worth what we do have.

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The first reaction is to  set out on ourselves in a journey where we can be easily depicted as If we were beings absolutely reluctant to accept the thing or even more  ???.. it seems that our attitude will never change. An arrogant or unyielding attitude which its only duty reseamble thats only duty is to stay in that mood forever. 
I consider think the only way to cuts down the negative effects or consequences of whatever be the problem we need to deal with is: trying to take it in as soon as it would have possible.  ????
After a while it is not as difficult come back to reality. Because the roughest time has gone passed and those thoughts that you had put backwards behind you are in your life once again. The difference is that now it is easy to visualize a new Landscape..
The stuff we have stumbled across, turned into new opportunities to take advantages of them and recognize and the worth of what we do have.

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How to deal with daily problems.

Many times I lose myself in wonders.  Many questions without any answer or only a very intrincated one.   (perhaps "intricate" instead of "intricated"). Here's a typical one:  there are things which comes about to certain people, and it is absolutely unfair that it happens in that way.  It can be failed (or "faulty") desitions decisions we made, failures in our decisions or things we could had have never get gotten out of it. In one way or another, I  their development would had been just a matter of time their development.  Usually I am prone to cling** wondering to myself why life is so unfairly in certain aspects. ***   I´ve runned out with ("hung out with" ?) people who don´t deserve such dreadful episodes or who have suffered illnesses which definitely should not be playing an active role in those scenarios. There are is a lot of unfairness throughout their lives. ****

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* The concepts of "failed decisions" and "failures in our decisions" seem identical.   Perhaps #2 could be "failures in our implementation of our plans"? 

** I wasn't sure how to fit "cling" in easily with the rest of the sentence -- so I erased the word.  But if the idea of "cling" is important, we could find a way to restructure the sentence.  For example, "I am prone to cling to the belief that life is very unfair in certain aspects." 

*** If you want this sentence to keep the question mark at the end, you can use quotation marks:  "Usually I am prone to wondering to myself, "Why is life so unfair in certain aspects?"

****  "Unfairness" in an uncountable noun, so it needs a singular verb:  "There is a lot of unfairness."   Another option is to say, "There are a lot of unfair things..."

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How to deal with daily problems.

Many times I lose myself in wonders.my thoughts
Many questions without any answers or a very intrincated complicated one.  No sé qué querías decir con "intricated"
Typically they are common ones. There are things which comes about happen to certain people, and it is absolutely unfair that it happens in that way.
It can be fail desitions poor decisions we made, failures  in our desitions or things we could had never get have never gotten out of it. In one way or another I would had been matter of time their development. One way or another it would have been happened in a matter of time.
Usually I'm prone to cling wondering ask myself why life is so unfair in certain aspects? I´ve runned out with I've known countless people who don´t deserve such dreadful episodes or to suffer suffering illness which definitely should not be playing an active role in those scenarios. There are is a lot of unfairness throughout their lives.
People tends to be not be emphatic with  situations which are not directly related to them, and many times it is true that they can even are able to draw a comparison between their lives and the others' lives.
In other cases it became in a final step, where something pretty similar is founded in their life, and that is the moment when they surprisingly turn into in a blank canvas.  No sé qué quieres decir aquí 

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The first reaction is to set out ourselves in on a journey where we can be easily depicted as If we were beings absolutely reluctant to accept the thing (or "the situation.")  or even more.. It seems that our actitud attitude will never change. An arrogant or unyielding attitude which its that's (or "whose") only duty reseamble seems to be to stay in that mood forever.
I consider the only way to cuts down (or "reduce" or "minimize" or "avoid") the negative effects or consequences of whatever be  the problem we need to deal with is: trying to take it in as soon as  it would have  possible.
After a while it is not as difficult to come back to reality. Because the roughest time has gone passed and those thoughts that you had put backwards (maybe "pushed into the background" ?) are in your life once again. The difference is that now it is easy to visualize a new landscape..
The stuff we have stumbled across and turned into new opportunities allows us to take advantages of them and to recognize and worth value what we do have.

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Alternative wording that would also correct:  "The first reaction is to set out on a journey where we could easily be depicted as if we were being absolutely reluctant to accept the situation."

"take it in" -- the meaning here is a little unclear.  Some suggestions: "Trying to understand", "trying to solve it", trying to tackle it"



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