English diary. Day 4
Today was very productive day and feel tired. I did my work, went to the gym and learned German with a teacher. Today was my first workout in the middle group. It was not so easy as I expected, but I showed a good result during my workout and I'm proud of myself. My German class was very interesting and I've learned several useful phrases. I'm feel a little confused because I have to learn alphabet and some easy stuff, but it a good point I will know the basic very well.
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English diary. Day 4
Today was a very productive day and feel tired. I did my work, (see below) went to the gym and learned German with a teacher. Today was my first workout in the middle group. It was not as easy as I expected, but I showed a good result during my workout and I'm proud of myself. My German class was very interesting and I learned several useful phrases. I'm feeling OR I feel a little confused because I have to learn the alphabet and some easy stuff, but it a good point (Unclear: At some point? At a point in the near future?) I will know the basics very well.I did my work -- I worked -- I went to work
I did my work = the work that I had to do, at my job, at school or at home : homework, housework, classwork,)
Here, if you are talking about a JOB you went to, say "I worked" or "I went to work"
learned German with a teacher
You would not use the verb "learn" here.
How do you learn German? by yourself or with a teacher? I'm learning English. The baby is learning to walk.
Here, you should say, "I had a German class" or "I went to a German class". OR lesson (I had a German lesson)
as... as
It was as easy as I thought.
I am as tall as my father.
showed a good result -- we would not say this. We would say, "I made good progress"
I've learned vs I learned
I've learned many useful expressions (from the time I started learning German till now)>
I learned many expressions in class today. (SIMPLE PAST -- an event that is completed)
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English diary. Day 4
Today was a very productive day, and I feel tired. I did my work, went to the gym and learned German with a teacher. Today was my first workout in the middle group. It was not so as easy as I expected, but I showed a good result during my workout and I'm proud of myself. My German class was very interesting and I've learned several useful phrases. I'm feel a little confused because I have to learn the alphabet and some easy stuff, but it a good point I will know the basic very well.Showed a good result is fine grammatically, but an American might say "did well". :)
it a good point--I'm not sure what you are trying to say."At some point I will know the basics very well," would mean in the future you will know. Or maybe you are trying to say, "it is a good idea to know the basics very well." ?
Great job!
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English diary. Day 4
Today was a very productive day. That's why I feel tired. I did my homework, went to the gym and learned German with a teacher. Today was my first workout in the middle of a group. It was not so easy as I expected, but I showed a good performance during my workout and I'm proud of myself. My German class was very interesting and I learned several useful phrases. I feel a little confused because I have to learn the alphabet and some easy stuff, but it is a good point that I will know the basics very well.0
Probably better to use achieved rather than showed when describing the successful workout.
Last sentence would flow better......I'm feeling a little confused because I have to learn the alphabet and some easy stuff, but it is a good point and I will know the basics well.
I'm not trying to be picky and if I've misunderstood what you were trying to say, then please accept my apologies!
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