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This is a short e-mail to my friend:
Hi Tom,
During our last conversation you mentioned that you don't manage your time very well, and that's a big chore for you. Therefore, I've got a few pieces of advice for you. First things first, If I were you, I'd get rid of all distractions like Facebook, Twitter, Instagram and so on. Try to keep them on the minimum necessary. Then, remember to set up a time management sheet. It could be on your computer or on you mobile. Such a things constitutes a regimen, and really keeps you in check everyday. Focus on your daily habits, take up exercising and take care of your sleep hygiene, you'll earn much extra time during the day, if you learn how to get up early. Overall, you need to work on your self-discipline. There's no time management, unless you're able to push yourself to do things, you'd planned yourself. That's all for now. I hope my advice will be helpful.
Take care!
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Can I have corrections please?
This is a short e-mail to my friend:Hi Tom,
During our last conversation you mentioned that you don't manage your time very well, and that's a big chore for you. Therefore, I've got a few pieces of advice for you. First things first, If I were you, I'd get rid of all distractions like Facebook, Twitter, Instagram and so on. Try to keep them to a minimum. Then, remember to set up a time management sheet. It could be on your computer or on your mobile. Such things constitute a regimen, and really keep you in check everyday. Focus on your daily habits, take up exercising and take care of your sleep hygiene. You'll have much more time during the day, if you learn how to get up early. Overall, you need to work on your self-discipline. There's no time management unless you're able to push yourself to do things you've planned yourself. That's all for now. I hope my advice will be helpful.
Take care!
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