My first drawing
When I heard the music of Marin Molin I wanted to draw. And I wanted to live. This music made me happy. So I drew Martin Molin and his musical instruments.
It was my first job. I corrected the picture in Photoshop and published it in Martin's fan club. The guys liked it, they wrote me words of support, they inspired me to draw on and even advised a service for learning English.
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My first drawing
When I heard the music of Martin Molin I wanted to draw and I wanted to live. This music made me happy, so I drew Martin Molin and his musical instruments.It This was my first job. Later, I corrected edited the picture in Photoshop and published it in on Martin's fan club. The guys in his fan club liked it the drawing. They wrote me words of support and they inspired me to continue drawing. on and They even advised me as to where to find a service for learning English. Mmm
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Now I'm writing in English recently. If you find a mistake, you can correct me. Just rite write to me in the messenger.
Awesome story. I like your picture.
Good sentences. Keep writing and drawing.
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My first drawing
When I heard the music of Marin Molin I wanted to draw. And and I wanted to live. This music made me happy. So so I drew Martin Molin and his musical instruments.It was my first job. I corrected the picture in Photoshop and published it in Martin's fan club. The guys liked it, they wrote me words of support, they inspired me to draw on and even advised a service for learning English.
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I'm writing in English recently. If you find a mistake, you can correct me. Just ritewrite to me in the messenger.
Good job! I would study Independent Clauses to better understand how to make your sentences flow!
Love the drawing
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Wonderful, I like to draw roses.
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