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If I won the lottery I'm not used to buy the lottery but sometimes buy them the last of the year. If I won the lottery: -I want to travel all around the world, and see many things and try the gastronomy of each place. -I will buy my second home in the southern island. -I will begin new business. -I want to buy some lands and construct an apartment . -I will put money away. I think if you won the lottery you will be able to do a lot of things you want to, if these things are what you can buy with money. There are the people who say that buying the lottery is just losing the money, but lf you didn't buy the lottery you will never win.

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If I won the lottery

I don't buy lottery tickets often, just towards the end of the year.


- If I won the lottery:
- I would travel all around the world, and see many things and try the gastronomy of each place. (gastronomy is too much, you would sound more natural with local cuisine).
- I would buy my second home in the southern island.
- I would begin new business.
- I would buy some land and construct an apartment .
- I would put money away

I think if you win the lottery you will be able to do a lot of things you want but cannot without funds.  Some people say that buying lottery tickets is just (losing money/throwing money away), but lf you dodn't buy the lottery - you will never win!



Very good, just note if you are talking about 'If I win', you are talking about would/might.  If you were talking about guarenteed money, you could say 'will'.

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Thank you very much.:) I like your way to spend the money too.
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If I win the lottery I will start studying on italki 10 hours a day. :) In my opinion the above entry is perfect and does not require any corrections.

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