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I like walking One of my most favorite activities is walking. Walking every day makes my body healthy, but most of all it releases my mind and spirit. Every time I walk, I go listening either English stories or variety music. At that moment, the whole world is disappears, nothing is important to me, it is my reflection time. I am with myself, only me. Near of my house, just one block away, there is a large, relaxing park. As in every park, this one also has a lot of different kinds of trees and birds. Unfortunately, nowadays, I cannot do this because in my city the temperture is extreme. In Summertime it is not possible to walk under the sun. We are a terrible heat during almost the entire season. If I do it, I have a great riske of losing my health. Currently, I just have to wait for the Fall. I spend my time studying English, reading books or swimming in my pool. Fall I am waiting for you, please hurry!

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I like walking

One of my most favorite activities is walking. Walking every day makes my body healthy, but most of all it releases my mind and spirit. Every time I walk, I listen to either English stories or  a variety music.


At that moment, the whole world just disappears, nothing is important to me, it is my reflection time. I am with myself, only me.


Near of my house, just one block away, there is a large, relaxing park. As in every park, this one also has a lot of different kinds of trees and birds.


Unfortunately, nowadays, I cannot do this because in my city the temperature is extreme.

In Summertime it is not possible to walk while exposed to  the sun. We are in a terrible heat wave during almost the entire season. If I do it, I run the risk have a great riske of  harming my health.


Currently, I just have to wait for the Fall. I spend my time studying English, reading books or swimming in my pool. Fall I am waiting for you, please hurry!


Muy bien!!!   

Run the risk significa “Toma un riesgo en un proyecto por ejemplo.  Todos hablantes de ingles úsalo.

Por ejemplo..      If we don’t pay the price, we run the risk of losing the opportunity.

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I like walking

One of my most favorite activities is walking. Walking every day makes my body healthy, but most of all it releases my mind and spirit. Every time I walk, I go listening listen to either English stories or a variety of music.
At that moment, the whole world is disappears, nothing is important to me, it is my reflection time. I am with myself, only me.
Near of to my house, just one block away, there is a large, relaxing park. As in every park, this one also has a lot of different kinds of trees and birds.
Unfortunately, nowadays, I cannot do this (BETTER: go walking) because in my city the temperture is extreme.
In Ssummertime it is not possible to walk under the sun (BETTER: outside, under the sun). We are have a terrible heat during almost the entire season. If I do it, I have a great riske of losing my health.
Currently, I just have to wait for the Ffall. I spend my time studying English, reading books or swimming in my pool. Fall I am waiting for you, please hurry!

This is very good.  I could have changed things more, to create a better and more fluid English style, but your basic English is correct.

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