Should University Students Go in for Business?
With the utilitarianism more and more popular in modern worth-value system , students nowadays want to go in for business as early as possible. Some undergraduates even take off their own business as a sophomore, or junior. Different attitudes are taken toward this issue. To my regards, we should focus on our studies and put our hands out of these issues. My reasons are stated as follows:
In the first place, as an undergraduate, our task is to study our major knowledge, and prepare ourselves to meet the needs of the society and the modernization construction of our country. The opportunity and time of studying at school are very precious that should not be wasted mindlessly. Businesses will for sure take up great amounts of time and energy, which will definitely impair our studies.
Secondly, most undergraduates do not possess yet the ability to open up own business. Even as an economics major , undergraduates are still not well-educated enough to encompass all the knowledge and experiences entailed by running a business, let alone students in other majors.
Last but not the least, it’s very inconvenient for undergraduates to start a business. Some universities banned students to do so. Most universities requires students to live in campuses, which make it inconvenient to work outside in societies. What’s more , the public do not trust an undergraduate entrepreneur or something like that so much as they trust a graduate man. The opportunities may be surprisingly slice and situation surprisingly harsh than you have imagined.
With the above statements ,I really don’t think it's a great idea to go in for business as an undergraduate. Focus on study, and wait for a couple of years, things will get better and the opportunities to success will be greater
This is an assignment by teacher. If you can help me correct it, God will bless you for your kindness hehe. i will correct your composition in turn, i promise. the picture spent about 1.5 hours, not finished , but i'm too lazy……= =
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Should University Students Go in for Business?
With utilitarianism more and more popular in a modern worth-value system , students nowadays want to go into business as early as possible. Some undergraduates even start off their own business as a sophomore, or junior. There are different attitudes towards this issue. In my regards, we should focus on our studies and put our minds out of these issues. My reasons are stated as follows:
In the first place, as an undergraduate, our task is to study and consolidate major knowledge, and prepare ourselves to meet the needs of our society and the modernization of our country. The opportunity and time of studying at school are very precious and should not be wasted mindlessly. Businesses will take up great amounts of time and energy, which will definitely impair our studies.
Secondly, most undergraduates do not possess the ability to open up their own business. Even as an economics major , undergraduates are still not well-educated enough to encompass all the knowledge and experiences entailed by running a business, let alone students in other majors.
Last but not the least, it’s very inconvenient for undergraduates to start a business. Some universities have banned students to do so. Most universities requires students to live on campus, which makes it inconvenient to work outside in society. What’s more , the public do not trust an undergraduate entrepreneur as they would trust a graduate. The opportunities may be surprisingly limited and the situation may be more surprisingly harsh than you have ever imagined.
In line with the above statements ,I really don’t think it's a great idea to go in for business as an undergraduate. Focus on study, and wait for a couple of years, things will get better and the opportunities to success will be greater
This is an assignment by teacher. If you can help me correct it, God will bless you for your kindness hehe. i will correct your composition in turn, i promise. the picture spent about 1.5 hours, not finished , but i'm too lazy……= =
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You write well and I totally agree with you.
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