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Some people think that Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, that only governments and corporations can make a difference.

Many people nowadays ignore the environmental issues and disregard the importance of the environment. Despite the government laying down some laws and regulations pertaining to the environment, people still throw waste into the river or cut trees in third-world countries. Generally speaking, I disagree with this notion and will outline my reason in this essay.

First of all, I consider protecting the environment everyone’s responsibility. If a drop in a bucket won't make a difference, then everyone needs to add their own drop. If everybody take action to benefit the environment, everything will improve. Adults will set a good example for the children and protecting the environment will become a moral duty. It also becomes a pursuit for everyone to improve the environment. From here we see that individual actions are extremely important for the environment.
It is a fact that governments and corporations can make a massive difference. For example, the government can use regulations to control people’s behaviour and companies can distribute leaflets to promote environmental protection as well as changing their own waste policies. What’s more, word can also spread by advertisement. If people keep the view of protecting just as the rule, they also can turn against it. On the contrary, if protecting the environment is related to the spirit everyone will think it as a duty rather than a chore.
To conclude, for the environment the part is more important than the whole. The more people that join, the more power the movement gains. Despite the individual having a huge impact, the biggest factors must be the corporations and the government setting an example for everyone to follow.

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