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Should we travel by cheap air? - Writing Challenge Day 6 This is a translation from Chinese. (Question) Many people think cheap air travel should be encouraged because it gives oridinary people freedom to travel further. However, others think this leads to enviornmnetal problems, so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people from having it. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. (Answer) With cheap air, people can travel across borders cost-effectively. We can take advantages of cheap air, although there is a need to cut needless trips. Some people are strong advocates of cheap air traveling because it provides people with opportunities to travel to different countries, expose to diverse cultures and broaden their horizons. Cheap air makes it possible for people to work in other countries and earn more. It also helps businessmen make more profit by importing and exporting goods. If the price of air travel rose, they may lose their chances. However, it is sometimes argued that, by rising prices, we can reduce pollution caused by airplanes. Because people are likely to delay or cancel their travel plan when there is a higher ticket price. With fewer airlines, there will be fewer emission of exhaust gas. Some other problems related to the airline industry, such as noise pollution, environmental destruction induced by building airports and other infrastructures, will be solved too. In my view, there is no need to raise prices, because people have the freedom and rights to go traveling and enjoy themselves. Nowadays, people are busy and stressful especially those working in metropolises. With cheap air, they can go somewhere further and have a relaxing vacation. For example, Chinese like to visit tropical countries on their holidays. They can enjoy delicious food there rather than stay at home. In general, my view is that it is unreasonable to limit the development of cheap air. In most cases, it's profitable for ordinary people to take a trip by cheap air. Airline companies should make an effort to decrease the strain on the environment through technological innovation.

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Should we travel by cheap air? - Writing Challenge Day 6

This is a translation from Chinese.

More common to say budget air travel rather than cheap air travel


(Question)
Many people think cheap budget air travel should be encouraged because it gives ordinary people freedom to travel further (or more). However, others think this leads to environmental problems, so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people from having it.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

(Answer)
With cheap air budget air travel, people can travel across borders cost-effectively. We can take advantages of cheap air fares, although there is still a need to cut needless trips.

Some people are strong advocates of cheap air travel ing because it provides people with opportunities to travel to different countries, expose to diverse cultures and broaden their horizons. Cheap air makes it possible for people to work in other (or foreign) countries and earn more. It also helps businessmen make more profit by importing and exporting goods. If the price of air travel rose, they may lose their chances opportunities.

However, it is sometimes argued that, by rising prices, we can reduce pollution caused by airplanes. Because people are likely to delay or cancel their travel plan when there is a higher ticket price. With fewer airlines, there will be fewer emission of exhaust gas which contribute to pollution. Some other problems related to the airline industry, such as noise pollution, environmental destruction induced by building airports and other infrastructures, will be solved too.

In my view, there is no need to raise prices, because people should have the freedom and right s to go travelling and enjoy themselves. Nowadays, people are busy and stressful, especially those working in metropolises. With cheap air budget air travel, they can go somewhere further and have a relaxing vacation. For example, Chinese like to visit tropical countries on their holidays. They can enjoy delicious food there rather than stay at home.

In general, my view is that it is unreasonable to limit the development of cheap air budget air travel. In most cases, it's profitable beneficial for ordinary people to take a trips by cheap air on budget airlines. Airline companies should (instead) make an effort to decrease the strain on the environment through technological innovation.

Again very will written Kevin

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