Hello, (1) my name is (2) Eva. I'm 29 years old and I'm from (3) the (4)Canary (4) Islands. (5)

Hi Eva,

Just some suggestions for your writing: 

(1) "Hello" is used to greet someone or get someone else's attention. It is an example of an interjection, and we separate an interjection from the rest of the sentence with a comma (,).  

(2) Your name is unique and is a proper noun. We capitalise the first letter (E). 

(3) We use the definite article (the) for some geographical areas or geographical features such as mountain ranges and island chains. Other examples: The Galapagos Islands, the Andes.

(5) We end a sentence with a full stop (for declarative sentence), a question mark (for interrogative sentence) or an exclamation mark (for exclamative sentence).

Lastly, welcome to italki!

My name is eva I´m 29 years old

( correction )

Hello, my name is Eva. 

I’m 29 years old, and come from the Canary Islands.

My name is eva I´m 29 years old