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An opinion essay As far as I concerned, the chages produced in the last 15 years are notorious. Not only have we changed our way of working because of the new technologies, but also we have had to learn a new language in order to communicate with the youngest, the social media language. I am going to start with the changes that have taken place in work. Unemployment has increased dramaticaly due to the fact that new machines have reemplaced manual work and and amount of manual workers have lost their jobs. FurtherMore, people become pensioners later than fifteen years ago, They have to work until they are 67-68 years old. This has terrible consequences to young people because there are not enough jobs. Speaking about the changes produced by new technologies, we have to say that the social media has changed the way of communication between teenagers. 15 years ago, young people used to go to fast food restaurants to hang out with their friends, now, they prefer to speak each other through a screen when they are playing a video game. This new way of interaction has changed our society too. At the moment, it is impossible to have a conversation between parents and their adolescents children. In my opinion, new technologies are amazing but we have to know how to take advantage of them before the lack of communication has fatal consequences in our lives.

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An opinion essay

As far as I'm concerned, the changes produced in the last 15 years have been incredible. Not only have we changed our way of working because of new technologies, but also we have had to learn a new language in order to communicate with the younger generations: the social media language.
I am going to start with the changes that have taken place at work. Unemployment has increased dramatically due to the fact that new machines have replaced manual work and manual workers have lost their jobs. Furthermore, people are becoming pensioners later than they were fifteen years ago, They have to work until they are 67-68 years old. This has terrible consequences for young people because there are not enough jobs.
Speaking about the changes produced by new technologies, we have to say that social media has changed the way teenagers communicate with each other. 15 years ago, young people used to go to fast food restaurants to hang out with their friends. Now, they prefer to speak to each other through a screen when they are playing a video game. This new way of interaction has changed our society too. Right now, it is impossible for parents and their adolescents children to have a conversation with each other.
In my opinion, new technologies are amazing but we have to know how to manage them properly before the lack of communication has terrible  consequences for our lives.



Se usa la palabra "notorious" por alguien o algo que es famoso porque es mal. Por ejemplo, "a notorious gangster".

En inglés, cuando hablamos de un concepto en general, no se usa el artículos definido. Se dice "social media" y no "the social media".

"fatal" tiene la significación de "letal".

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