Bridget Jones's Diary (part 3). Please correct my writing)))
Bridget couldn't face the thought of going to work. The only good thing about going to work for Bridget was the thought of seeing Daniel again.
Having come at work the first person who Bridget met was Perpetua. Perpetua was wearing a tight red skirt, which made her bottom look very big. But she didn't care about how she looked. Perpetua is a Sloan, which means she is not only rich, but also very confident. Bridget always wishes she could be like that.
Daniel Cleaver asked Bridget if she got anything nice for Christmas in a rather flirty way. Bridget wondered if he was attracted to her. Bridget thought she might wear her short black skirt next day.
Later Bridget's friend Jude rang up in tears because Jude's boyfriend, Richard, had told her he didn't want to see her any more. Jude's friends all call him 'Vile Richard' because he is so horrible. Richard thought Jude was getting too serious about their relationship because she asked him to go on holiday with her.
Bridget immediately called Sharon, their other friend, and they arranged to meet Jude in Cafe Rouge.
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Bridget Jones's Diary (part 3). Please correct my writing)))
Bridget couldn't face the thought of going to work. The only good thing about going to work for Bridget was the thought of seeing Daniel again.
(When she arrived) at work the first person who Bridget met was Perpetua. Perpetua was wearing a tight red skirt, which made her bottom look very big. But she didn't care about how she looked. Perpetua is a Sloan, which means she is not only rich, but also very confident. Bridget always wishes she could be like that.
Daniel Cleaver asked Bridget if she got anything nice for Christmas in a rather flirty way. Bridget wondered if he was attracted to her. Bridget thought she might wear her short black skirt next day.
Later Bridget's friend Jude rang up in tears because Jude's boyfriend, Richard, had told her he didn't want to see her any more. Jude's friends all call him 'Vile Richard' because he is so horrible. Richard thought Jude was getting too serious about their relationship because she asked him to go on holiday with her.
Bridget immediately called Sharon, their other friend, and they arranged to meet Jude in Cafe Rouge.
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