I would be really grateful if you help me and correct this simple paragraph. Thank you very much
Nana and Dreams
Dreams come to my grandma come true. People dream two kind of dreams, one means what they want to have or to be in future and the other one what they have while are asleep. For sure, my grandma dreams about real dreams. The fact is that every time she wakes up with a dream, it just comes true. For example, one night she dreamed about my sister’s pregnancy. My brother in law knows about the mystery in my grandma’s dreams, so he took my sister to the hospital to know if there a pregnancy or not. Eventually the test pregnancy came and it turned out that my sister is pregnant. Moreover, what weird when she dreamed about the destruction of the town by a huge flood. My father is sheriff and take my grandma’s dream in a very serious was. Therefore, he start to evacuate the town neighbor by neighbor. Again, the dream come true and the flood made a massive damage to the town. Now when it about my grandma’s dreams, we just set and wait for it to happen.
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I would be really grateful if you help me and correct this simple paragraph. Thank you very much
Nana and DreamsDreams come to my that my grandma has come true. People dream two kinds of dreams, one means what they want to have or to be in future, and the other one what they have while they are asleep. For sure, my grandma dreams about real dreams. The fact is that every time she wakes up from with a dream, it just comes true. For example, one night she dreamed about my sister’s pregnancy. My brother in law knows about the mystery of in my grandma’s dreams, so he took my sister to the hospital to find out know if she was pregnant there a pregnancy or not. Eventually the pregnancy test results pregnancy came and it turned out that my sister is pregnant. Moreover, it was what weird when she dreamed about the destruction of the town by a huge flood. My father is sheriff and took take my grandma’s dream in a very seriously was. Therefore, he started to evacuate the town neighbor by neighbor. Again, the/her dream came true and the flood caused made a massive damage to the town. Now when my it about my grandma’s dreams, we just sit and wait for it to happen.
Golly, what an amazing story!
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really cool story !
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