travelling with my friends
me and my friends travelled to Blitar. Blitar is small city in east Java, Indonesia. in there, me and my friend visited tomb of Soekarno and penataran temple. soekarno is first president of Indonesia. in there, we're noy only visited funeral but also library of Soekarno too. second place is penataran temple. in penataran temple, we saw the beautiful temple. we learn the history of this temple too.
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tTravelling with my friends
me and my friendsMy friends and I travelled to Blitar. Blitar is small city in east Java, Indonesia. in there, me and my friendWe visited tomb of Soekarno and pPenataran tTemple. sSoekarno is first president of Indonesia. in there, we're noy visited not only funeral tomb but also library of Soekarno too. second place is penataran temple. in pPenataran tTemple, we saw the beautiful templeone. we also learnd the history of this temple too.
Hello nanda, Thank you for chatting with me the other day.
I correced what I noteced. "second place is penataran temple" was flawed. You already wrote on previous sentence. "penataran temple" is special place, so you should written as "Penataran Temple."
Your attempt was good. Please continue to write as such. Do your best!! ('-^)b
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I'm very sorry. This site warned me of failing to send my correction, so I sent it again.... Actually, a first sending would have succeeded.
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tTravelling with my friends
me and my friendsMy friends and I travelled to Blitar. Blitar is small city in east Java, Indonesia. in there, me and my friendWe visited tomb of Soekarno and pPenataran tTemple. sSoekarno is first president of Indonesia. in there, we're noy visited not only funeral tomb but also library of Soekarno too. second place is penataran temple. in pPenataran tTemple, we saw the beautiful templeone. we also learnd the history of this temple too.
Hello nanda, Thank you for chatting with me the other day.
I correced what I noteced. "second place is penataran temple" was flawed. You already wrote on previous sentence. "penataran temple" is special place, so you should written as "Penataran Temple."
Your attempt was good. Please continue to write as such. Do your best!! ('-^)b
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